Wow, definitely a different take on the story! It's not what I expected, but I liked it.

Once I read the line, "Jasper was reading some boring book that made me want to die all over again..." I laughed out loud, and I continue to do so even now as I tell you how much I love your originality. I have never read anything like this, and I am truly impressed at your creative writing.

ok, i'm going to be completely honest with you. i didnt like this story until we found out that edward and bella could communicate. the first chapters are necessary but with that extra bit it made the story great! also i kinda hate that edward killed himself, it ** me off that he would leave his family like that but then again i love that he would do that for bella :)

the idea for the story was great and really original! i loved it. :)

No, Bella has an undying love for Edward. If her love were dying, it would mean that she will fall out of love with him.

“That’s what delusions always say.”

Oh? And how would you know that, Edward? Have you gone %D before?

hey loved it ...
plz keep going on ur a fantastic writer and i'd love to read more of ur stories

Lol, the end was kinda funny... though it would have been erm... not better per se preferable? If she just possessed Tanya or something and they stayed 'alive'
lol

AW
I cried for Charlie.

I always wondered what would have happened if he actually did snap... though I kinda never put actually KILLING Bella into the mix. I figured that, considering his plan was to take out everyone else first the others would get there in time and they'd be forced to change her or kill her... Or she'd go mad and get locked up.
LOL

So bella's a ghost of some sort?

L0L? Hmph. Interesting.

Read this before but it's still good... no idea why i can review this chappie again...

this was so different i loved it they are still together forever but just not in the same way!! fantastic what a brilliant idea what gave you this idea?

That was a great story! Very well thought out. It had a great plot and you have a talent for writing! I was hooked the moment I started reading. I cried when Bella couldn't sway Edward's choice, and cried when she thought he was gone. One of my favorites! X

I like your story, I've added it to my C2 if thats okay :)