This was a beautiful tale!
I loved it very very much :P
LOL I just have to steal a line from Queen Beryl here. It's so sweet it's giving me cavities!
Well done :P

I love the story...

i was just expecting it to be angsty...

wonderful story...but the ring should be on her left hand, seeing as it was an engagement ring, not her right hand. Still one of the best I've read :)

I love, love, love when Motoki gave Mamoru a verbal beating. 'Twas my favorite part. :D But overall, your story was pretty amazing, and I would love to see more works from you.

Adorable.

Oh!
My heart melts and I have tears in my eyes!
it´s so romantic and great!!
Usa and Mamo forever!

You write wonderful!

LOve it! Great story. made get a bit teary... sniffle! Okay will someone pass me the tissues? (grabs tissue) thanks.

Love it

Loved it, hehe, again. :)

Oh this sweet! Loved it!

OMG this was such a cute story! I completely love it!

You are be beyond brilliant! This is the most touching Usagi & Mamoru short love story I've read in a long while. You did a beautiful job on this, thanks for taking the time to write it and sharing it with everyone. I'm so adding this to my favorite stories list. Thanks again, later!

Awesome. Loved it.

great great great!
great job. I will be on the look out for more of your work. This was sweet.

I love this story. Thanks for writing it. Mamoru was so swet with his proposal. It's a classic fairytale weaved into the modern times. It's just what I needed to cheer me up and bring back hope to me that sometimes life can be a fairytale with the classic ending of "And they lived happily ever after ..."

lmao omg i loved it! the part with the little kids was defintely the best!