Reviews for On the Outside Looking In

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drkkizzes12 2008-03-14 ch 2,	abuseaw...only 2 chapters! i hope you update.
sesshoumaru's killing blade 2007-11-13 ch 2,	abuseoh, please make this story a kagome and miroku story! I've only ever read a feww really good kag/mir stories, and this story form what you have posted is really good! i'm a big fan of your other stories too. please updated. Thank You!
kagome.inuyoukai 2007-11-06 ch 2,	abuseI have no problems with a Miroku/Kagome fic, but peronally, I enjoy Sesshoumaru/Kagome fics more. ...You could try to show how their relationship starts up again, and how Kagome places trust in him, or something like that. Please update soon! :)
HentaiVixen 2007-10-21 ch 2,	abusemk mk mk! please up date soon!!
henio 2007-09-18 ch 2, anon.	abuseHmm... maybe I'm being spiteful cause I have depths of evil spitefulness in me that I can't deny. But I kinda want Kagome to end up with Miroku cause of the crappy, crappy thing Sesshoumaru did. Revenge! Comeuppance! Die Sesshoumaru die! gasp Can't believe I said that, but a choice between sweet, loyal Kagome and cold-hearted, left Kagome for another girl! (btw how did he even believe Sara got pregnant in the first place unless he slept with her while engaged to Kagome?!?!?!?) Sesshoumaru, I'd choose Kagome no problem. Argh, but on the other hand the SK pairing is my favorite and I'd wouldn't like it if Kagome and... Sesshoumaru too, suffered. =S Hmm... tough choice. I know! Maybe a threesome?!
joy 2007-07-06 ch 2, anon.	abuseMiroku and Kagome. Sesshoumaru F*CKED UP too badly to win this time. Let Miroku win just this once. Plus I keep thinking he did it once he'll do it again. Go Miroku and Kagome!
darkangel 2007-05-20 ch 2, anon.	abusei think miroku should get the girl. There are so many fics with sesshoumaru getting her. Let him feel the pain of rejection =P. Anyway, good story, not the most original plot, but there are worst out there. I think you've started pretty well. looking forward to the next update
popcorn 2007-05-04 ch 2, anon.	abusewell, i'm an avid SK fan, but the first part had shattered any trace of possible ending for both of them (well, in my opinion, but i know u being the best angst/romance author of SK's, you could pull it off!! :3) but something unique of Miroku and Kagome would be nice, it would be a great twist!! But it would be challenging... Please update soon, ne? thanks!! ;3
fairia13 2007-04-22 ch 2, anon.	abuseI'm totally rooting for a MK pairing. There is deffiently NOT enough Miroku love in IY fandom. Actually... I've never written a MK piece either. Maybe I should. Besides, if Sesshomaru was such a dumbshit, he deserves to lose Kagome. In fact... yeah, this needs to be MK. For once, the good guy should get the girl! ...But, if you're torn, why not write it both ways and tell the reader if you want MK go to chapter 3, if you want SK, go to chapter 4? Like those books they had when you were little, the choose your own adventure ones? Ah.. this isn't signed, I know. But I'm on FFnet as fairia13. In shameless self-advertisment, you should check me out, especially if you like the Sess/Rin pairing at all.
Sesshomaru's Beautiful Kris... 2007-04-13 ch 2,	abuseSESSHOMARU AND KAGOME SESSHOMARU AND KAGOME NOT MIROKU AND KAGOME SESSHOMARU AND KAGOME FOREVER! LUV YOUR FIC SO FAR AND YOUR LONG CHAPTERS JUST REMEMBER SESSHOMARU AND KAGOME FOREVER
Duzzie 2007-03-18 ch 2,	abuseI loved it. It's written quite well, and the plot is extremely interesting. You've done a wonderful job so far. Though I love both SesshoumaruxKagome and MirokuxKagome pairings, I think I would like if this story would go along the MIROKUxKAGOME pairing. I rarely find a good Miroku in fanfiction, and so far, you've made him lovely, so that's my vote.
DeathDagger 2007-03-13 ch 2,	abuseStraight up so Sess just leaves like that...I think I like Miroku being all noble like...update soon...I can't wait until you finish this story
Miss Artemis 2007-03-12 ch 2,	abuseMIROKU x KAGOME! MIROKU x KAGOME! Sesshomaru seriously ** up. First he commits adultery and then he willingly walks out of Kagome's life despite of the fact that Kagome may be hurt, but she would at least still love him. He should trust her! God knows how much she trusts in him. I hope that dream will make her ask InuYasha to tell her the truth because that dream she had, it seems like a message to me. It was like telling her in a subtle way that Sesshomaru wasn't trusting. Poor Miroku, I feel for him! Please allow them to be together! ONEGAI! Drops to her knees I BEG YOU! Sesshomaru needs to learn a hard lesson, one that he needs to learn for life. There are things in life that can't be made up for, especially for what he did. Not to mention he even STAYED in the relationship with Sara (I never really liked her, but you made my hatred for her burn) after knowing that the girl wasn't his true daughter. Kagome deserves to have true happiness from someone who actually looks after her feelings and well-being! Miroku is the one to help her! I'll be watching you...0.0 -Miss Artemis
Cel Deifin 2007-03-10 ch 2,	abuseI do enjoy a good S/K pairing, but giving Sesshoumaru's nature, he's bound to mess up somehow, so I wouldn't mind M/K. Especially here. Kagome needs to heal, and it seems Miroku would be perfect for that. There's too much between Sesshoumaru and Kagome to work out in the end. I'm not sure what's worse: Kagome finding out he left her of his own free will for another woman (and staying with said women even when the reason for marrying her turned out to be a lie), or Kagome thinking he's dead... But leaving Kagome uncounscious outside in the cold is just plain cruel on Sesshoumaru's part. It's kind of fitting for Miroku to nurse her after this. So my vote turns out pretty clearly for M/K.
Kura-sama 2007-02-27 ch 2,	abuseI think the story would be good going either way, MK or SK ... While I am an avid SK fan, I must I vote for MK in this case. Sesshoumaru is such a pighead and he needs to have a taste of how Kagome felt when he just abandoned her like that. Kagome is too fragile ... I think it'll be more soothing for her to be with someone like Miroku, who heals her slowly, than dumbed back into the heartache that is Sesshouaru. She's still wounded from his departure, and I don't think she'll be that ready to accept him back, since she can't even get over him in two years. She'll want explanations, and be hit hard all over again over his betrayal (when she learnt that he didn't die), and that's a bit too much to just gloss over. Their relationship might not even go back to how it was in the begining ... the past will always shadow over the future. I think, a new start with Miroku, is good in this case. (With how fragile she is in this fiction, Kagome might well break down if she were to learn that Sesshoumaru is not dead but actualy left her to be with someone else who he might have had a child with.) Besides there's not enough MK around~ heh ^^ Miroku is so nice ... the "perfect" gentlemen, if you go past his perverted ways. He really is very gentle and caring. Totally opposite of Sesshoumaru ... Maybe he is what Kagome needs to heal?

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