This one really got m thinking, beautiful insight on the mind of a heart-breaker.

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

aww so sweet and very sad - i bet Alanna was annoyed with her daughter but secretly found her remark quite amusing.

Great job, I loved the ending.

I love this. It is so believable, especially the exchange between Alanna and Aly. I'm trying to think of somethin that can be improved, but nothing comes to mind. Good Job!

I loved it. Sad and bittersweet, but it really does fit her character well. Good job!

omg...so...heartbreaking...*sobs

I really like that. The way it is at the end . . . I thought it'd be something different, and that was really good.

Do I HAVE to review?

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Amazing, Sam. Postively lovely. *big smile*

AW! How cute!! I love how flirtatious Aly is. And everybody knows she isn't going to keep that promise.

I shall have to read the next chapter to find out what happens.

Oh, and I know what you mean about being busy. Sometimes I have time that I could use for writing, but I don't. It's just one of those things where you feel lazy...

Keep up the good work!

-MaroonPhantom

Great one-shot. Poor Alan and Ermy. And Aly the Heart-breaker. lol

aww poor Ali. she was only trying to help .
she reminds meyself of me :)

although it was short i loved it . I love stories with Ali in them n you do Ali so well .

And dont worry bout not updating the other stories . i no u have a life outside of lol we all do . so just update wen ur ready :)

.:Lioness of tortall:.