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| TriGemini 2008-04-28 ch 38, | abuseGood chapter! Sounds like Tyr isn't giving up just on the idea of having Beka with him. Not to mention, it also seems that things on the Andromeda are semi-back to normal. Especially, things between Beka and Harper. Although, Beka still seems to be upset with Trance over what she had said from beforehand. Looking forward to more. Until then. |
| TriGemini 2008-04-03 ch 37, | abuseGood chapter! Sounds like both Beka and Dylan are getting along great and are really happy. Problem though, is that Lana still believes that Beka should return. And also sounds as if Lana is willing to do whatever it takes to make sure it happens. Very curious as to what'll happen next. Until then. |
| riordan123 2008-03-25 ch 36, | abusePlease don't tell me this is going to be a Dylan/Becka story, because I'm just not feelin' that. |
| TriGemini 2008-03-15 ch 36, | abuseGood chapter! I suppose after everything that's happened, Beka realizes that maybe at this point that the only who can really support her is Dylan. Because he's the only one who's tried to make her feel better after everything that's happened. Considering that the rest of them have only tried to make her feel worse by their opinions and wants. Hopefully, with Dylan's support Beka can overcome the situation she's facing at the moment. Looking forward to more. Until then. |
| TriGemini 2008-03-07 ch 35, | abuseGood chapter! It figures that Beka wouldn't get along with Rhade. Not really, surprising. After all she's only getting over having to deal with one Nietzschean and now she's stuck having to deal with another. Only this one doesn't seem to be going away anytime soon. Kind of surprised at the ending...definitely didn't see that one coming at all. Sure makes for interesting suspense. Looking forward to more. Until then. |
| Yvy 2008-03-06 ch 34, | abuseShe has been a fool- that will change I hope? love the story by the way. |
| Bellkie 2008-03-04 ch 34, | abuse'ho man I'm really not liking Trance at the moment |
| TriGemini 2008-03-04 ch 34, | abuseAn interesting chapter! Looks like Dylan confronted Trance about what she's been saying to Beka. Can't blame him for being angry. Not to mention, even Harper seemed shocked to find out what Trance had been doing. Sure Trance may have a good reason. However, it sounds as if she's putting the greater good of the Universe and future in front of her friendship with the ones she's close too. Looking forward to more. Until then. |
| Yvy 2008-02-29 ch 33, | abuseGood old Dylan trying to fix things, I'm always curious to see where this story is going to go next! |
| TriGemini 2008-02-29 ch 33, | abuseGood chapter! On one side, Beka may have a logical argument on why in the end Dylan would probably hate her. However, maybe Dylan has a point to tell her he could never hate her...despite her present situation. Not to mention, he also seems to be angrier at Trance. Considering that Trance knows a lot more than she's saying and it's not helping anybody that she's trying to convince that Beka needs to leave. So it'll be interesting to find out how this will all play out in the end. Looking forward to more. Until then. |
| sherril 2008-02-24 ch 32, | abuseI liked the bit with the confused Dylan most. ^^ Well, I think this will get complicated. Both have feelings for each other, but neither wants to admit it. And yet they can't just go on as if nothing happened. I think there might be some awkward moments. I mean, there is no turning back anymore, they have to work with each other and live on the same ship (well, at least if Tyr doesn't kidnap Beka again), they can't avoid each other. The famous no-romance-at-work-thing. Beka's in an awful situation. She will always think that her feelings for a man are because of her being a Nietzschean. But it's so obvious that she doesn't think and feel like a Nietzschean, a Nietzschean wouldn't mind hurting anyone. Well, thinking rationally... Beka and Dylan should talk to each other, that could make some things more clear. |
| TriGemini 2008-02-22 ch 32, | abuseAnother interesting chapter! In total honesty nobody can really expect for Beka to be 'normal' again. Especially, after what Tyr did to her. However, if Dylan truly wants to help her, he'll get over his hatred for Nietzscheans and help her out. Or better yet, come to the understanding that even though, Beka has been genetically altered to be a Nietzschean, it doesn't really make her one and he shouldn't judge as badly as he does the rest of them. So it's going to be a long road for everyone to adjust and to help out. That is of course, if they're willing. Again, looking forward to more. Until then. |
| sherril 2008-02-20 ch 31, | abuseWell... I can cope with it. ;) It's just that I don't like Dylan very much. He is just too nice, too brave, too good. He's the absolute hero, so very stereotypical. And I don't like his hairstyle. ;) I'm not sure if he would be the right partner for Beka. I think they can be great friends, they work well together. Whatever, I liked this chapter anyway. You're writing style is vivid (I hope this is the right word, English isn't my first language). I can very easily feel with Beka and even with Dylan. Dylan really feels more for Beka than friedship, but I'm not sure about Beka. She is desperate, coming back and feeling just as unaccepted now as she felt by Tyr. Dylan is the only one who was willing to accept her "new self", so it's only natural that she feels drawn to him. One thing seemed a bit odd to me. You wrote "Beka had spent months imprisoned by Tyr". Months? I had problems to estimate the amount of time Beka was imprinsoned, but I haven't thought of such a long time. I hope you update soon, I'm very curious how this goes on. |
| TriGemini 2008-02-20 ch 31, | abuseGood chapter! I'm beginning to think that the only person who's really worried about Beka's well-being is Dylan. After all it seems everyone else seems to have their own opinion on the matter. And so far, their opinions have made Beka feel worse and not better. So it's rather interesting that Beka would go looking for comfort and friendship from Dylan. Then again, out of all them he's probably been the most worried on how Beka is even handling this situation to begin with. Looking forward to more. Until then. |
| sherril 2008-02-17 ch 30, | abuseTrance should consider revealing a bit more of her thoughts and the things she know. She can't seriously think that Beka is going to obey when she acts so cold and uncaring. I know, Trance has never been very informative about what and how much she knows... Well, and I don't like the idea of Beka and Dylan being both half-naked alone in Dylan's quarter very much. ;) |