Oh, I can tell this is going to be good =D *adds to alerts, faves* I love how descriptive you are about everything, it's like I can see everything that they do. Poor Rikku...

its different...i like it

O_o... Beautiful... That's all I can think of, my mind is SO compelled by this story. Beautiful, the way you write just drags me into the story... And seeing poor Rikku like that... And Auron... Even just at chapter three, this is on my top of best stories... Written, and by storyline...

And trust me when I say that I have read a lot of stories.

A little OOC, but you explained that... And i don't think Rikku would be herself either after something like that happened... she was Broken after all.

And Auron, I have always believed he had a soft heart with a rough exterior. How else would Tidus be such a dork?

Beautiful, keep it up... I cannot wait for the next chapter in this masterpiece.

~~WW~~

Omg...

your writing is brilliant BEYOND brilliant!

You MUST continue..You MUST! This is far too amazing...

*Kudos to You*


~DeniedLuv

very interesting and very good. although i have to admit that it is scarey that you mentally undress auron every time he speaks in the game but then everybody has their own preferences huh? i'll also admit that i mentally undress tidus everytime i see him and i'm not getting very pissed off at the game. although the designers could have, should have made the game so you could travel as whoever you wanted. not just tidus, the idiot an mental moron.

Aw, adorable! I loved it. It was definitely worth the wait, and I'll be waiting to read more. Keep up the great work :)

I was WONDERING when you were going to put this chapter up, lass! It's good to see you haven't given up on it yet!

Who knows? Maybe I'll be able to put MY work up here someday...

Virtually nonexistent...HA. I think I beat you by miles in that category. :)

Damn, I wanted Auron to completely MUFFINATE that guy...er, don't ask...

Good one.

-SV

for a chapter like this i really don't mind the wait. the depths in this are unbeliveable i truly love it. keep writing and don't worry about the length of time it takes you if you want to get it right. this is spot on. congrates

well, i really was surprised to see that this story had been updated, but i am delighted to have read it, and i thank you for continuing the story, an just hope that you would continue through your writer's block and write more for all those who have read this story and reviewed in hopes of reading more.

Oh wow oh wow oh wow! I love this story! The wording is fantastic and the story is brilliant... Aurikku is TOO cute. I beg you on my knees to continue, the plot is just to awesome to ditch. I love how Auron's all protective... can't wait to see how the relationship develops when they get home... :) cute.

Oh and I also undress Auron with my eyes everytime he speaks... especially when he growls "Pray. Now!" when he uses overdrives and stuff... mrrow XD

Please continue! This story is 5 stars!

YAY! Another chapter!!XD
I love it.

Later love, Marie

EXCELLENT AS ALWAYS! KEEP ON WRITING GIRL I BELIEVE IN YOU!

Yay! Another chapter. I've been waiting for quite a while for this. Make sure you update quickly.

Well first of all thanks for the dedication. I didn't actually do all that much; I just gave you the wee shove that you needed. Well done on getting the new chapter written. Its good, it flows on really well. You're good at creating an image, and maintaining the same image. Very well done, says I! Looking forward to the next chapter!