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Yorkie Lover
2007-10-26 . chapter 1
Yes, the Spanish was co,pletely unnecissary (lol) but that's only b/c I HATE SPAINSH!! haha seriously, only one kid I know actually likes it... he's a little odd...

But the rest? It was so funny!! I loved it! Is this a one-shot??

Lol,

Yorkie Lover
Sparky Heffely
2007-10-18 . chapter 1
Fascinating speculative writing.

*sighs* Alas, the sad thing is, the pathetically shallow conversations Galinda has with Pfannee & Shenshen are the sad constant at my school.

Well, keep up the great work!
GelNimbus
2007-09-13 . chapter 1
This is hilarious. You should do more with this!

*favorited*
HaChosenOne
2007-09-01 . chapter 1
The Spanish was unnecessary, but the story idea is great! And I'd like to see how Nessa and Morrible approach these...loptaps...laptops...whatevers.
Zarrian
2007-08-20 . chapter 1
I loved it. Very in charater,... great job... Oh god I need to read the book.
Please Moo With Me
2007-08-06 . chapter 1
Funny. and I am sorry. But I do think that the Spanish is unnesissary (or however you spell it.)

(One laughing.)
**Bestest**
The Pixess
2007-07-15 . chapter 1
I don't know about unnecissary, but Spanish- please don't mistake me for sounding like a tool for pointing this out- derives from, like, Spain. Which is in the Wizard's world. So, needless to say, it wouldn't be known in Oz. You could make up your own language using foriegn countries near Oz, like Quox. Or Filaan. Nobody uses Filaan as much as Quox, I don't know why. There's another country shown on the map in the book, I think, but I'm too lazy to go get it. Sorry.

Little Voice: M'dear, I hate to interrupt, but you realize that the time spent babbling pointlessly about Maguire=universe could be spent transcribing Scottie- or Dark-Eyed Beauty, if you really want to keep blittering about Filaan.

I'm sorry, what part of YOU ONLY PLAGUE ELPHABA did you not understand? Go read your contract. And also Dark-Eyed Beauty, as Filaan is only referenced, like, once.

Little Voice: It's not my fault you insist on screwing Melena over.

IGNORE MY SHORT ATTENTION SPAN/INABLITY TO NOT DISPLAY SPOILERS. I liked yr little edits, specially Ozjournal. Yay your continuing! Oh and sorry I haven't replied to your review yet- see my profile for explanation.

Hearts,

Pixie

P.S. "Earbobs" is a word. At least, spellcheck took it. It's in "Gone With The Wind" a lot, I think it's just a dated term for dangly earings. It seemed a Galinda-esque phrase, anyway.
lotrelves
2007-06-28 . chapter 1
*laughs* Good job Jelly! I loved it. It was so funny. The characters didn't seem too OOC. I hope you add more soon.


From your friend,

Elfy.
angel718
2007-04-22 . chapter 1
I think this'll be hilarious...love Fiyero's sn. :D Galinda and the smilies...(shakes head)
blue-eyed claudia
2007-04-07 . chapter 1
i appreciate the review that you gave but i would have rather that you looked at the content. i liked this story it was good but random.

blue-eyed claudia
notEASYbeingGREEN
2007-03-16 . chapter 1
oh my gosh i absolutely love this! there were so many humorous points that i can't even say all of the best...

“I wasn’t finished! I made that word up. It’s a word that combines ‘wicked’ and ‘bitch’. You’re a Wicked Bitch!” (i think that that one just may be the best) fiyero's screen name got me, too. lastly, when glinda got totally obsessed over the smilies...i could totally see her doing that.

it's amazing, this was just a burst of boredom and you still made it into a story that i can't wait to read more about! this is going on alerts and favorites, so make sure you update soon! (note the various exclamation points)
Happieranonymous
2007-03-09 . chapter 1
that is good. Galinda seems a little slutier than i imagined her, but, oh well. It is good anyways.
Vicster's Jar of Dirt
2007-03-06 . chapter 1
Never thought I'd see Wicked in IM form. Loved the screen names.
Asparaga
2007-03-04 . chapter 1
"Their together thing." That's gotta be the best reference to "stuff" I've read/heard in a while.

...I like it! Hehe the Ozians with computers...very good idea/story! Ah, the things that come out of boredom...
Western Arawen
2007-02-28 . chapter 1
I am so proud of myself. I finally read this story. :-)

Wow...randomness and Wicked 2gether, something i practically never read and when I do i hate it. But this...this could be interesting.

~Arawen
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