:D

i love this!! so sweet i wish they had more of a romance during the game, not just at the end lol so much stuff happened to them tho, poor garnet going through her mute stage... at least she had zidane... this was so intense but it was so right for them, if only garnet could actually speak!! hehe very nicely written, loved everything about it, especially wen he proposed ^^ excellent work! :D

wow that was a pretty good story

I admit, i dont knwo that much about ff8, but i found this was actually really good, seeing as i haventreally read fan fiction from this game before. I thought you wrote it incredibly well, but seeing as you like constructive critisism, i would add more about thier feeling for each other during ...it. :P
But i really like it, i might go and check your other work if you have any.
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AW... That was so sweet! I also liked your Robin Hood reference. *hands you cookies*

Mystic

that was great one of the best ff9 stories i have ever read

So sweet! ^_^ Good job!

Coo
It was cool, but methinks that potatoes should be involved

Great story. You should write more.

good story but one problem, theyre 16 so technically they cant get married

It was glorious, a film shall be made! YOU SHALL HAVE YOUR LEMON FEATURED IN THE MOVIE!

great story. I love ff9 but there aren't enough zidanexgarnet fics

I really love this. The characters are very well portrayed. ^^ in fact this sorta inspired me to write my own fanfic x3 check it out maybe if youre bored? Its my only one up on here. Not heavy into the romance yet, but...ehh. ^^; just trying to get feedback.

very kinky, some minor grammer and verb tense mistakes but good otherwise

You see this is practically the only lemon-y zidane/garnet thing i can find (it's good), all those other lazy bastards are too busy writing slash to go and produce nice *aw* scenes,
*aw*