Dude, nice story so far. I say updated to account for the final season and bring more chapters in so that it can truly rock the house

So, it seems that not all of Ron's friends are happy with his girlfriend. Yori knew Ron was "dense" about some things, Tara should have known as well. Ron's in trouble and so is Kim. Two young ladies with murder on their minds, it might be too much for Kim to handle. However, she is the girl that can do anything.

The two would be assasins don't realise that Ron may not be very happy with their mission. He may come in to play as well to protect his Kim. The other girls might want to get a life and move on.

Tara is in "mad dogs and aliens" 4-05
00:04: right side lower level on the inside
00:10: upper right corner
00:16: just to the left of the bleachers
13:50: bottom support on left side
i could go on but i made my point.
other than the Tara in collage thing good story so far.

Dear Lord! Kim is in serious trouble. I love the sprint comment as well!

where is the confruntation?? tell me now i want to no what happens.

Seriously...that is just sick-wrong...but great to read though. I just can't believe that they didn't even need to talk to understand their motives. Wow...talking about girl-to-girl understanding. Seriously!(Motor Ed words). well, until next time.

Danny

A girl with a grudge is dangerous, BUT two girls with a grudge...I seriously don't want to be on their path. I hope nothing BAD happens to Kim, since I'm a hardcore fan of them. Until next time.

Danny

After reading this one through again, please allow me, CMY, esteemed colour commentator of fanfiction, to take a breather from my usual style of reviewing and instead show off, er, display my intellectual insight into S-Chrome's character from this fanfic. Well, some of it, anyway...

1) S-Chrome dosen't like the mind-numbing torture known as studying. Woo-Hoo! Down with textbooks! Everyone to the Arcade!

2) S-Chrome knows that it is unwise to say a syllable in the presence of a jilted, enraged teenage blonde, er, girl. Very unwise. That tells us something about Bonnie Rockhead, erm, Rockwaller, dosen't it?

3) S-Chrome understands a great deal about irrational negative emotional projection, or, in dude lingo, really freakin' steaming mad, yo!

4) S-Chrome likes Afro-picks. On this one, I don't even want to know.

5) S-Chrome is a fan of Bill Watterson's Calvin and Hobbes...just like me!

6) S-Chrome likes to show us how ridiculous an advertisement can be when placed in the imaginative minds of himself and his partner Dr. Vainglorious. Notice how my reviews are totally tax-free. Read 'em now!

7) S-Chrome apparently liked the airplane scene involving Bullseye from the movie adaption of DareDevil. Except in this case the annoying, blabbering ba(censored) wasn't killed...what a shame.

This has been a throughly unprofessional, unauthorized review of S-Chrome based on his own co-written fanfic, 'Good Grief'.

Until next time, this is CMY, the long-winded guy.

You are now allowed to throw your remote at the TV.

Like I said this is funny and well written. You did a great job. I love it how Ron knows. I just thinkit is so great you know. How he knows, but anyway good job. I like how they bow and nod at the vry end. Tag team ideas? Don't have any, but this story is great.

*Raises Fists to curse the sky* NO! Curse you for not updating faster. This is such a funny story and the reactions from both Yori and Tara are absolutely priceless. Having them meet right before the confrontation with Kim also was really well done. The 5 steps of denial was also hilarious to read about as was the plane ride. Who hasn't had a person sit next to them that wouldn't shut up? And you're right, Wilson was a freakin' Volleyball. Anyway, I hope you update soon.
Always at the Author's Side,
The Real Sidekick

Absolutely incredible. Like a certain professional wrestler has been labelled, this fanfic is Simply Phenominal.
The first two words I had said out loud after finishing the chapter were these extremely famous ones :
"Oh, Shit."
Kim's in a LOT of trouble...(Suspense music plays)
Yori and Tara converging on one spot...the only chance Kim has is if they turn on each other...
One order of next chapter please. Grande Size with lots of Diablo Sauce...

P.S. I imagined myself in Yori's shoes when she was on the plane...oh, the horror...my eye wouldn't stop twitching...what did she EVER do to you? (What would I have done? I would have unloaded some Samoa Joe moves on that idiotic, blabbering $#%$@@#^%$%^ and then tossed him overboard...)

P.P.S. Damn right, it was just a volley ball, Hanks! He really needs to find himself a girl...

great chapter, i enjoyed it much.

Oh dear, Kim's in trouble now! Could Ron maybe help her with his MMP? Would Yori be, like, immune to it or something?

Also, where did the idea that Tara was older than Bonnie come from?

Anyway, hilarious story! I am on the edge of my seat and bting my nails for poor Kim. Shego's nothing compared to this!

Anxiously awaiting updates,

Numbuh 212

This story is so badical, I'm literally bouncing in my chair waiting for more (Yes I'm that hyped up for it and its not because of the organic poptarts giving me a sugar rush)!

Tara and Yori cancelling each other out and Ron and Kim rolling by in 'the Sloth'... but that would be too Disney.
I like Ron's sense of foreboding, it really works with his personality and Kim mocking it and such fits with hers... she never listens when he calls 'bad news'.
Thanks for the great read!