good like always

i read this beforee it really good i liked it again even know it's a one shot you should change that and do another chapter

do another chap please!! this is so good! they way you wirte is great, i luved how you described the silence around them when nki and bradin walked in! so another chap!! so good!

tht was so good u should keep writing it is very hard hitting i think im even tearin up a bit ~lol~ well keep writing

i thought it was a cute story. i liked ur writing voice and how descriptive it was. a few things could have been changed in the grammer choice, but tht could be found in any writing. the writing choice of another sister was a lil random ... where did u think of an idea like tht?? but it was a good decision and i liked the ending.

keep writing xoxo

Oh, this was SO good!! Do a second chapter definitely! I LOVED it!

~Anna Christie~

I'm a "Summerland" fan, and I say, LET THE STORY CONTINUE! One suggestion...Why not include the other deceased family members in this piece? As I recall, their parents and a younger brother died in the premier episode. It would make a nice addition, I think.

Aww so sad, I'd really like to see the next chpter, you're a great wrtier!

aw..that was really sad.
good, though.
very very well-written.

this is very good i still dont see how u think of all tstuff to wright keep up the good work love ya

Hey gurlie! Well I must say, this was one of your best so far. You really are improving with each story you write. It's such a heartbreaking story. Very good job on the emotions, and the imagery throughout this chapter is really superb! As usual, I saw only the usuaul grammer mistakes, and you were a bit wordy in some places where consiceness would have worked better. But all in all it was very good. Keep up the good work Jmac!

OMG! That is so sad T.T And really really really good... I really like it


(oh and in case you didnt know... its me.. T.H. :D lol)

That was cute and a good start! Update soon! : )