 TTCyclone 2009-09-05 . chapter 1oh awesome so far |
 serin2 2009-07-30 . chapter 7ouch... that is all i need to say.
you have a problem with separation. a scene change should have a line break of some sort, either custom or the ones the site provides in document manager. and you should have something to separate speach from description, like you did ealier in the story.
ja ne, |
 pearl84 2009-05-29 . chapter 7Wow! Funny stuff! And very orginal, too! You have a bit of grammer errors, though. Thought of getting a beta? They can be of a lot of help! Aside from that, you are doing an awesome job! Character's reactions are awesome! And did I mention how funny this is? Heh! Keep it up! I look forward to more! |
 SBHY01 2009-05-29 . chapter 7Oh my god this is so flipping funny. I am IN LOVE. This idea is amazing. I was just a little confused when there weren't any quotations, but other than that, this chapter was amazing!
Please update soon! :) |
 doinstuff 2008-04-05 . chapter 6please please update this! its one of the most original ideas involving vlad that ive seen! keep going! you write so well, i would really hate to see your story stay like this; at chapter six, right in the middle. |
 inukagome15 2008-03-11 . chapter 6WAHAHAHAHAHAHA! How can you NOT have updated this for so long? I can't wait to see Plasmius flying around in a bed sheet! |
 New Ghost Girl 2008-01-27 . chapter 6this is way too funny!! pwease updatee!! :D LOL |
 chalicity 2007-10-10 . chapter 6 i love the idea of a reversed vlad! well-written, entertaining, and fun! |
 Mad-Hatter-LCarol 2007-06-19 . chapter 5 oh. my. GOD... *laughing* that's just... *haha*
poor, poor Danny *still laughing* |
 shadow 2007-06-08 . chapter 6 It's be interesting to have the two fight, but with Danny as the villain. You know, for irony. |
 Shou-Hato 2007-06-02 . chapter 6Interesting,now that I think about it,maybe there should be a story where someone actually uses the Reverser on Danny! That would make a great story!
Too bad, Bertrand should like the new,nice Spectra,but what would she really feed off? She can't just give up on making misery so she can keep living,right? |
 Shining Zephyr 2007-05-31 . chapter 6-falls over- Oh, dear. I'm still trying to imagine Vlad WITHOUT a bedsheet now. This is great! I love it, love it, love it!
~Shiny-san |
 MysticalTears 2007-05-31 . chapter 6It took so long fior you to update!! *sobs* But here we are, in a new chapter, woohoo!!
Aww... doesn't Bertrand like the new Spectra xD? And.. will Vlad change back to himself, or is this indeed permanent? Please update soon again!!
Love,
MysticalTears. |
 Shou-Hato 2007-05-18 . chapter 5Hilarious.The next thing we'll se is Vlad acting like Super Danny:
"Relax,Citizens,Super Vlad is on the job!" |
 shann1 2007-04-29 . chapter 5This is great fun!! I like how you've managed to keep Vlad believable even though he's acting so out of character, keep updating PLEASE! |