Please update soon!

i noe that the guys r shocked and upset 2 find out that Takuyas didnt tell them anythin but shouldnt they b a little more worried about wat the digimon wanted

The ideya behind your story sawnds good but its sort of Hard to read. The Story line is vary chopy and dusent mack much sens. I would triy werking on the Flow and timeline a little more. Also triy to mack it more oveyis on how posificly is talking.

was the end a scene from the digi-movie runaway locomon?

really good story :) hope u update really soon wanna know more :D

good luck with ur story

dragi

so how r Bokomon and Neemon suppose 2 get 2 the human world

it dosent suk and its the 1st chappie it doesnt have 2 have action its 2 start introducin the characters and maybe the problem

Hey, welcome...

This story sounds like it could be pretty good.

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