very cute, it stops a bit sudden though.

Hahaha... That was so cute...

wow. so cute and sweet and definitely fluffy.

thankfully aware of the difference between catching a cat versus a snitch

i love that line.

I loved it so much and I cant believe you only made it one chapter and you should add more to it!

aww cute!

i like it, but you should have made it longer, you could go somewhere with it...keep up the good work