I'M ON CHAPTER 5 AND THIS STORY IS BRILLIANT! (SO FAR) Thanks for including Paine and Baralai, splendid work!

of course seymour has to be a creepy racist
and auron has to save the day!
it wouldn't be a good ol' fashion high school fic if it ended any other way.

either way, i enjoyed it. :)

WOw, these characters are so mature
and their principal so strict on violence!
/sarcasm
:P I kid, I kid.

The word whore is used so often... and slut, and... i dont know it's starting to seem a little childish, i guess, and this transformation is too quick, and lenne is in the story discription... but hardly in the story...
but yeah, im still reading.

Why is baralai swearing o.O

This is still great, but the theme of the story thus far is slightly fantastical, where are everyones parents, girls in highschool just moving in with boys? haha, and a little overdramatic to boot, but i like drama and fanatical stuff every so often, so its okay.

Wow, that was really cruel.

Awe this chapters sad.

I'd like to see some more... seriousness from tidus, hes so abnormally cheery...

I always kind of liked barthello...

Still cute.. althoug i expected some sort of retaliation when yuna told tidus she wouldn't kiss him if he was the last man on spira...

now..
where are my dozen cookies, and make it a bakers dozen! jk.

Awe, how incredibly cute. I'll keep reading, for sure.

What about Shuyin and Lenne?

Fantastic fic!
Great mix between comedy, romance, drama n everythin u wrote it reali well! =D
Reali enjoyed readin it n can't wait 2 read da sequel!

~*Kez*~

Alright its 3:41 a.m. and ive just read this story (which i COMPLETELY love)


HURYY UP AND WRITE IS SEQUAL IM DIEING!!