This is really cool. but you should have made Amy's chapter longer.

First of all exactly when did you wright this? Anyway great stuff!

i like the transition though the fict! i love the end! :D

Oh my. ^.^

They are both so adorable! I just love these two together. They're so cute! ^^

Yet another good story!

So emotional and cute...

Hope you write more! :)

~L.M~

Wow, well, I read both chaps. and yeah, very cool. Yeah, you have your grammar probs. but nobody's perfect, this is not ENC 1101 and the final exam is tomorrow...lol. Well, I liked it very much! Write more, and um...try to maybe do like a story and stuff? The poem is nice, I just...want more lol. But yeah, great job! Very different, very good, A+ ^_^

OMG totally LOVE!
it was so touching...sniff...sniff... i feel a tear on its way...*anime fountain* WA! THATS WAS SOO COOL! AND SWEET!

EMI: wow shes so emotional! *smacks Arianna on her head*
ME: OI! i'm here enjoying some story and you butt in with your big butt?!
EMI:your a big fat but! and iam not a butter! i've done nothing of the sort *smacks Arianna on head again*
ME: OW WHAT YOUR PROBLEM MANN THIS WAS SO NICE BEFORE YOU CAME HMPH!...
to be continued else where away from this review lol

really sweet! absalutly adored it!
KEEP IT UP!

Humorous... and lovey-dovey (kind of).

Nice work.

*giggles* Oh Amy... I'm sure all of the Shadow fandom loves that certain ruby eyed hedgehog X3 *cough*me and the million stong fangirl population*cough*
Great chapter, I really liked this bit:
"Don't tell your ex-crush that you have a crush on his rival. He'll go and kill his enemy, and ruin your love life."
and this one:
"Dancing in the rain is extremely pleasing. However until you realize you are not alone and Shadow the hedgehog gives you that look with his eyes."
They were pretty and lovely X3.. Oh I'm such a girl X3
5*
Will there be more? *hopes so and alerts just incase*

Nice one-shot! Nice and poetic! Loved it! I am a ShadowXAmy fan myself, and I agree with you about Sonic on Amy. I used to love a guy who was just as blind as he was. Hope to see more fics by you.

~Clover-chan~

*giggles*
Shadow is so cute, no matter how crazy he is X3
Lovely story... although the use of the word '**' automatically raises it from a K. *shrug*
I loved it X3
5*

Aw! So cute!

Now for my overview:

Not many spelling mistakes, only about four or five. Miraculously, there were no grammer mistakes. That is very good! Kudos to you, my friend.

This was... humorously hilarious; hehe, Shadow is so funny when he's psychotic!

Oh, and never overuse capitilization; just use it when the word is a proper noun, please. If you want to make the word stand out, then either use bold or italics.

Meh, those were the only mistakes I noticed. That is very superb! This was very... I'm not sure, you can't really describe it!

I would like to read some more stories from you, the author! Toodles!

*faves, author-alerts*