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Reviews for: Battle for My Heart
Andrew
2007-12-21 . chapter 1
This is a flawed idea.
CALL ME THE QUEEN OF GAMES
2007-04-11 . chapter 1
I LIKE THE PREVIEW> PLZ WRITE THE STORY!
HeartOfChaos
2007-02-17 . chapter 1
Usually I don't like YugiAnzu fics, but this one looks promising. Update!
HoC
Dark Shining Light
2007-02-17 . chapter 1
It was so CUTE!

( Not trying to pick a fight; you don't know how many people think that) But with the quotes Yugi is saying, it sounds like he's talking to himself since Jounouchi and Anzu are using the same quotes. Plus the fact that you switch fist POV and back to third maybe you should italize(can't spell) when he's talking about himself. Or do you already know this?

Anyway, its a cute story, even for a preview and I have a feeling I'm going to be stuck to this story for a LONG time!
dbzgtfan2004
2007-02-17 . chapter 1
This is a cute and cool story. Please continue. Yugi and Anzu forever.
journey maker
2007-02-17 . chapter 1
I reall like it so far.. Tea has always been friends with Yugi..I would like to see if it goes farther... Please update when you can...
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