Your fanfic story is amazing! Please finish this story! For my sake and everyone else. Thank you for writting such a fantastic story! :)

really loving the story update soon!

dude freaking awesome chapter!

new chapter please

You HAVE to post more! i read this story all the way through in one sitting! im in love with it! I really... want to know the ending.

Oh. My. God. This was amazing. I love it. I love, love, love it. The end- PERFECT. I loved how you broke down all our hope, only to surprise us with Claire being awesome ('cept that shouldn't be surprising, should it? Lol). But seriously, I really really liked this end. I do hope Claire's ok, though. PLEASE update soon! This is going to stick in my mind until you do. Please?

-SkyRogue

Oh that sucks..Claude's dead! I like Claude. Dammit. Oh well, I am glad that Peter killed Candice. It's not nice but in my book it's still right. As for Linderman, he still needed to die didn't he?

I hope Peter, Claire and the others will be ok.

Thanks for posting. Sorry I can't come up with more for ya but I'm riding on fumes and cold medicine. I need a

-Ellie

so good!

update soon please!

Oh my.. That was an intense chapter, really worth the long wait. Oh Claire! Hope she's alright.. But I cannot help imagining either Claire or Peter on the brink of death and the other despairing. Haha, I'm pretty mean but angsty storyline makes the happy ending so much sweeter.

I love your writing and this chapter was no exception. I can't wait to see what will happen next.

I absolutely adore this story. You've captured and developed the characters superbly and you've got me on tenterhooks at the end of chapter twenty one, part II.

Zomfg.

Powerful stuff. :D

Very sad, though. [

Wow, this story is AMAZING! I'm a new fan to this show but I all ready adore this couple and I think you do a really wonderful job writing them.

Tension, much? I love it! But I'm with Nathan and Niki, Sylars just playing a long con. He's luring Claire on Linderman's instructions!

Awesome. And it may sound weird to you but I'm glad that Sylar's getting a chance to be a hero.

Sad about Audrey. Can't wait to find out how everyone makes it out and what's going on with Peter.

Thanks for posting, come back soon!

-Ellie