LMAO funny. sounds like something the creators would make. very entertaining indeed. a lot of people wouldn't think reading sucked if writers like you hit it big.

...Your trying to think of and end aren't you. Take your time...I'll just wait...and wait...yeah...writer's block sucks now that I have it...

LMAO! The most unexpected boss encounter ever. Sorry for the missed review, twas internet hell in my house and still is. I'm on a temporary rouder and it's so SLOW! You sould write for Konami so they can make this a goemon game. I'd play it! It's a crime that he's not as popular as he should be be. Keep it up!

Hm.bang.bang ryhmes with pang. pang. korean for bang! BANG! BANG! PANG! OH NO THEY NEED TO HIT A PANGYA SHOT! OH NO!

Aww man more waiting...ANTICIPATION BUILDING, BLOOD PRESSURE RISING, WINDEX BLOOMING! OH BOY! WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE!

Heh, sorry reviewed the wrong spot...yeah...FINISH PLEASE!

Wow it's a shame there not more reviews, then again Goemons not a popular game either, well here's your motivation. FINISH PLEASE!

Why has no one made a review? I've read the first chapter and I LOVE it! I love how much detail you've put into it, it's a real treat to read. I cannot wait to read the rest of your chapters, so expect another review from me in the near future :D Keep up the great work.