this made me flipping melt.
I'm everywhere...all over the floor, the computer chair...
I'm a flipping pile of mushness.

god you're good!

You go girl!

omg this was so sweet do you still take fic ideas cuz i think something sweet fluffy funny and modernized sounds really good right now

I have this goofy grin on my face that just won't leave... And that's a lot, seeing my awful mood today. I loved it, a nice, warm and fuzzy little thing!

Now, get this lopsided-smile off my face... Hehehe, really, I feel much better now. ^_^

Aw, that was so sweet! Love Will/Liz mush, and this was beautifully done. I thought that it was an incredible portrayal of their relationship. You are, without doubt, my favorte writer of Will/Liz, and I really admire you and your work. Anyway, great job! loved the whole part with the bad cooking-- I feel for you Elizabeth :p

Well, I thought this was completely cliche and unoriginal, and a very unhealthy dose of sappy romance. Perhaps adding a bit more substance to your writing might elevate your acclaim to a higher standard for your readers, who, albeit, seem to enjoy this style of...fluff. But please take this as constructive criticism! I randomly happened upon your account, so I was interested in your writing from your profile, and I also wanted to see why people put you on their fav author lists (that's how I found your profile, through random people :D), so I have no personal venom against you, of course. That's not why I'm writing this.

My advice to you would be to read some clever, NON-PotC stuff to see how other authors write and to find some different thematic/stylistic elements you could incorporate into your writing. Of course there's always a process in learning how to write, so I think you should try to stretch to the next level.

I've tried to read a few excerpts from some of your stories so that I wasn't making too specific a comment to just this story, and I find that this review applies to most of them. There's a difference between writing in a sex scene just for kicks and for the reviewers pleasure, and writing in a sex scene when it is purposeful, realistic and contributive to the plot. Gaudy, smutty romance stories are totally overrated. Perhaps you should broaden your horizons to more...meaningful writing, than just writing a story so that you can insert a *gasp* scandalous sex scene.

Again, this was all to benefit you somehow! I hope that you won't take it personally, but there are SO many authors like you out there, maybe you should make the leap towards higher pursuits. And if you do not wish to apply this to your writing style, than maybe you can apply it to what you decide to read on Go look into other books and movies! And different genres, too. Like angst, or poetry, etc. If you need a list of some really good authors (which are all subjectively dubbed, of course) and inspiring styles/stories, just send me a PM and I can send you some. Or just look on some of my favourites lists! :D

Again, sorry for the unasked-for review, but I thought it necessary...maybe to shrink your head a little from all those extravagant and sometimes exaggerant reviewers.

-JKB-

I read this fluffy little WE wonder with a big goofy smile on my face. :D Thanks for writing this Karen! *bows to your amazingness*

Things I loved: The characterization. The descriptions. The Hollanders. Vulnerable!Will. Elizabeth's 'cooking'. The plot. The length. The Turner Special. And this sentance.

"William and Elizabeth Turner fell in love more than any other couples had in the history of mankind."

I love you dear!

pst.

You mentioned the story and then I remember I NEVER REVIEWED! Well at least I never did it formally, and so this is me doing it formally.

Halister Balongalong (mz-turner)+ the most fearsome pirate in the entire Karenbean (williz) = love!

Yay for your awesomeness.

*GET READY FOR SOME TIME TRAVELING ACTION HOMESLICES!*

WO...I love being your Muse soul sister, its the best job in the world.

p.s. if you were to write Henry and Clare fluff, then your pen name should be Henare. What say you to that Kare Bear?

WONDERFUL! thank you Williz and Halister Balongalong for such an awesome story and great idea! you know me and fluff, i cant help but eat it up. i love the play on the time/clock at the end. It was so sweet i think i have a cavity! (haha...silly me). i cant wait for more with London Calling, of course.

love love love love love,
InnerSmile

wonderful !

So romantic! [sigh] This was AMAZING, as usual--you always
portray Will & Liz perfectly, and definitely in character!

i loved this! it was so cute. you write the best willabeth stories!

AT LAST. I find a Will/Elizabeth one. They're getting sparse these days and I'm very frustrated...nice story!!

This story was awesome! I love how well you write Will and Elizabeth and I can't wait till London Calling is updated!

Happy Writing,

-Orlysluv

that was awesome! long live WILLABETH!