that was really good. you should write more chapters

ok i dont have much time for a review as i would like so here it is this sytory is really cute i hope u keep up with it and it witeen well i like it alot it totally sweet keep wwith the great work.

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Rachel A Brewer

Sounds like another chapter or 2 would be a good thing to do. Have one chapter about wedding planning and the last one with the actual wedding. Just a thought. Post soon.

cute

WOW that was FANTASTIC- i love the plot, you should continue with the story line. you earned a spot on my faves