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Reviews for: The Sweet Caress of Twilight
Riny Beoulve
2008-02-22 . chapter 1
Haha, a Lion King parody. That's so sickeningly sweet and adorable. And I LOVE Vaan and Fran's part in this.
Reks19
2007-11-03 . chapter 1
Can You Feel the Love Tonight... This is a beautiful piece only Fran was a bit out-of-character... In my opinion, you should've used Penelo for her part... Since Penelo would've said things like, "I tell you Vaan…this stinks.", or you could have included Basch and Fran in the more serious lines. Anyway, great story.
Fantasy Wings
2007-10-06 . chapter 1
Can You Feel The Love Tonight in Lion King... I love your stories... Truly... You are DEFINITELY one of the best authors I've come across with... :) I can't imagine Fran and Vaan singing so this adds up to the coolness... :)Although the characters(mainly Vaan and Fran) seem out-of-character, the way Ashe and Balthier are silenced seem to add to the dramatic tension... I love it. :)
Skitty 2004
2007-04-24 . chapter 1
"It was such a sweet smile…it made Balthier feel as if it were a crime to love someone so much." If it is a crime then it's a good thing Balthier's a sky pirate. XD... and you know, I really can't imagine Fran saying "This stinks". I don't think the word "stinks" being used in that context even exists in Fran's vocabulary. XD anyway, very nice oneshot. ^_^ Keep Writing!
Sita 900
2007-02-21 . chapter 1
hahaha awh! so cute... tho I cant imagine Fran as Timon. I love how Ashe and Balthier have no dialog... :)
m o o g l e d a i m e
2007-02-17 . chapter 1
Can You Feel The Love Tonight! (I LOVE The Lion King! :D) So cute with Fran and Vaan watching them. ♥
BaschLuvva
2007-02-17 . chapter 1
Can you feel the love tonight from the Lion King =P

lol

Really like how this has been done, it's very cute x3
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