i like it

women!
give me more!
please, more!

hey, beautifull!
more! please... finish the history, please!

i absolutely love this story, it is so cute and sweet! i cant wait to see an update!! and about that...i really dont need to tell you who im rooting or, do i? ahemSANAJATEahem =]

wow, a very heated argument between those two there! but it's great to see them sorted themselves out. and kate was right: she would never cheat on him! but now sawyer cheating on her? reading the last line: (Kate soon fell asleep in his arms, but Sawyer lay awake, unable to shake a nagging feeling about how it would feel if Ana were sleeping in his arms instead of Kate.)i can see that that could be possible.
i don't know what you want to end it in. as long as we don't have jacket, it's all the same to me! :D update soon!
bonboni
~X~

It definitely has to end Skate and Jana. Why are you even asking?!?!? lol!

Great chap, that happened pretty much like I imagined it would. very Sawyer to accuse her like that, and very Kate to be angry, but I'm glad that it worked out...tho I'm sure that the angst isn't over. :D

Update!

Loved it. Everything is perfectly IC. Loved this one.

Kate soon fell asleep in his arms, but Sawyer lay awake, unable to shake a nagging feeling about how it would feel if Ana were sleeping in his arms instead of Kate.

I admire you for being a Skater and being able to write a line like that. It's just wow. :P

And I vote, like most of the reviewers, for Sana and Jate. Cause 1; Sana is hotter and Jate is cuter in my opinion and 2; it helps you improve your writing if you write different ships apart from your favorites. I'm not saying anything with that, cause I haven't checked out your other stories yet, but I'm just searching for a good reason so you write Sana. LOL. :P

And this is the end of the not so quickest review ever. lol. :D

and lots and lots of SANA

because after all it is the best ship

this chapter was interesting for the skate relationship andd really seemed to set the sotry up for something bigger in a way that i really want to read so please please please go to twenty five chapters.

miralys

jate and sana please!

SANA SANA SANA SANA! None of this Jate, Jana, or Skate!

jate and sana!

Happy to see you update this little fic of yours! Loved the end of this chapter!

"but Sawyer lay awake, unable to shake a nagging feeling about how it would feel if Ana were sleeping in his arms instead of Kate."

It would be awesome if Sawyer and Ana got together therefore...

I vote SANA and Jate! :):):)

Update soon!

JANA JANA JANA JANA! There are to mant sana fics around and i like JANA more. BUT awsome chapter keep it going.

I vote Sana and Jate. I'd like to see Sawyer fall for Ana Lulu - they seemed to have a good chemistry on the show and it'd be fun to read it play out.