Lol. I sense a rant-fic. And it was funny, in a surpisingly realistic way. Haven fun putting more of your opinions out there and I'll be more than happy to read them.

Hooray! I was wondering when the next chapter of this was coming. There's just one thing I don't like about the review option; I always like to write my reviews as I read, not at the end, but the placing of the review button means that I have to inadvertantly see the end even if I try not to. *grumbles*

Um... isn't Raven's demonic side supposed to manifest when she gets **? Ah, there we go.

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You're not kidding me?

Well, my opinion is that it goes too far when somebody is violated, i.e.: it happens against someone's will. I have no problem with pornographic media as long as nobody is forced into it. Just because it's fictional does not make it any better.

What's even worse is when the raper is a Gary-Stu...

"Yeah," Mandy answered "the part where after it’s all over and the girl has been violated she goes right around says…she liked it."

(Wordless with rage.)

OMFG! You mentioned me!

Yeah, well; when I wrote the lemon I just thought; 'Ok, how sexually convoluted can I make this?' I never actually stopped to consider how impossible it was. But isn't that what lemons are about, i.e.: taking things to ridiculous extremes?

(Yeah, okay, I'm trying to justify my undeniably perverted self. So sue me. Even you do that in this chapter, both for yourself and I. Thankies.)

I know! How can they think that calm, analytical and clear thinkers like Slade could become so consumed by animalistic urges that they would actually go so far as to *rape* some girl?

(P.S.: Dr. Light may have a supervillain's powers, but even Billy is smarter than him.)

Yeah, the real Slade is oddly morally ambiguous, don't you think? I don't understand how they can make him so obviously evil in the cartoon after how he acts in the comics.

Rape comes down to one thing in the end: control. If you analyze my lemon fic with the Rob/Star scenes, and of course in the upcoming as-yet-to-be-posted sequel, you will see that control is *everything*. It is seriously arousing, I can understand that, but these people, as you say, don't seem to realise the psychological and emotional damage this can cause. If that don't turn you off, nothing will.

Mandy has good reason to hate boys. A lot of us are not even worth giving the time of day to. I wish it were not so, but I'm afraid it's the way of things...

Alright. This ** has so disgusted me that I can't even bring myself to watch it, and when I can't watch explicit material you know there's something wrong.

I completely agree with the point you put across, but doesn't it sound terribly artifical? The girls are simply there as your mouthpiece. Why include them at all? Just rant yourself.

Good luck with getting it banned, bro. I don't know how you're gonna do it; there are just too many bastards out there...

X-Kazza-X

Wonderful anti-rape message. A girl in my neighborhood was raped only a few months ago, and it really freaked me out. It was a rare case-she didn't know the guy-but I had thought it was safe where I lived. It's sad that there are men that view that as acceptable. And violent sex is far, far different than rape.

Trigon did rape some one namely Raven's mother. Raven is the end result of her mother being raped by the devil him self. Satan and his master Lusifer Moringstar are fallen angels not demons, so they could not be the devil. I however agree with a lot of what was said here about rape. What if the girl what's to have sex with a tentacal-thing? I have met a few girls that like that kined of stuff.(not the rape part, just the other stuff, and yes I do think that they are **!) The girls are the ones who like the idea of orgys, and having sex with more than one guy at a time. (like I said "**"!)

Very good chapter. I agree; rape isn't funny. The only time I more or less did a scene like that it was shown as something really bad, and the whole scene was implied, nothing graphic, plus the girl escaped and gave the guy a little lesson before doing it.

Keep the good writing.

question, as sick and distgusting as this is, hwo would be so ** up as to actually let someone make hat and post it on their own web site? and if it was just a made p thing for hte story then my bad for thinking it was real, but if it is real please contact me at so i cn get this website name. soemoe i know and am very close to went threw that kind of twisted ** thing and ANYONE who has the nerve, even in a anime sort of way, to post something lik this should be severly punished. not onlydoes it show their lack of real world exp. but itputs a ba name on anime itself and i honestly couldnt let two things go on, one let the human egotist ** and people who would post this give guys in general a bad name, but to let something as good as anime get a name as ONLY a ** area, intead of what it really is, witch is something that brings different worlds to lifein the minds of the watchers. *gasp* sorry for that, its late and i honestly dislike this kind of subject>.< grrness... neway cant wait for the next chapter

Man, I've heard of some sick people, but people who think rape is funny?

Must be rapeists themselves, hey?

I usually try to avoid fics like that, myself.

Oh, and I'm not sure that Raven is an actual "goth"...but hey, it's your fic, and its fun so...

Your doing a good job, keep it up.

Good chapter!
But I find the quote "Tell me, have you ever seen Darkseid, Dr. Doom, Apocalypse, Mr. Sinister, Slade, Dr. Light, Brother Blood, Trigon, Magneto, or any other villian of those high calibers try to rape someone?" really funny. You do know that Dr. Light actually raped the Elongated Man's wife in the comics? In fact, he now talks about it so much it's ridiculous. Anyway, I agree with your views on how rape in fanfic is usually pretty sick in the way it's presented. I like reading your fanfic, and this one even has less Robin-bashing than usual! Yay!

Tres Bien! Thank you for that! It was incredible1 People need to know that it's wrong.

UPDATE SOON!


(My last review I spelled Mandy's name wrong, sorry.)

You have some funny moments, and make good points, especially in Chapter 2. Rape is not about sex, it's about power.

In chapter 1 you need to add what show Ruby and Misery and company are from; I don't recognize them at all.

A candidate for membership: Alchemy from W.i.t.c.h..

One final point-- there is no "y" in Jinx. Yes, it looks cooler, but isn't correct.

Mady lives in Endsville. Grimmsville isn't even a place.

you know..you have just hit a topic that i agree with...maybe...lol

that was awesome.
i loved it..and i tell you one thing..i lvoe it when you make slade a perv..it works.


keep it up.

Dude, I lOVE this story! Ypu've put all my fave characters into one story, and it's funny to boot! Please update it, I love it! And if you ever need a topic for it, I got a million of 'em that then girls would just love to argur about.

Later, BlackGothFaerie

lawl!
it was kewl and funny and smart the way you captured eveyones personalityies- especailly mandy's and sam's... mandy makes me laugh a lot!

I like this. It reminds me of the pointless marketing scheme they have made called 'valentines day'. I hate this day of the year. It is just a money making scam.