I think I liked the Bloomsbury (or Scolastic)version better.
Including the Epilogue, although that trew me in deep shit considering my Drarry wishes.

I like how you chose to end the series, although for the life of me, I can't figure out who he's chosen to leave with. Perhaps you could write something that continues this little pocket universe? It would certainly be interesting to see the repercussions of the Second War with Voldemort throughout the rest of the world, Wizarding and otherwise.

Hey there!
Wow, I liked this. Really speaks to what war _does_ to those unfortunate enough to be caught up in it. What's really cool is that we're right THERE with Harry, feeling all the devastation and destruction and hopelessness that surrounded him. And what's more, we see it, feel it from the hero's viewpoint, the true hero's viewpoint; all along he's been looked to as the savior, brave enough to say a dreaded name. And here you've shown what a burden that is. It's too much for anyone, yet he does it.
It is good that he chose his own ending - and with what persons to end it with! *hugs*