Wow. Haku, the ever faithful.

I loved it it was very different and well written in my opinion. It was short but it tugged and sucked u into it so that u almost felt Chihiro's pain and became her.

I really don't know what you're talking about. This is one of the better written Spirited Away fics out there. Maybe you haven't been looking around but the majority are CRAPPY, let me tell you. This is good and I applaud you for it. I'm adding it to my favorites.

That was a lovely story. Beautiful.

(Renata)

Honestly? I thought it was fantastic. You shouldn't ever bring yourself down!

NO! I like your style. Don't stop writing. Seriously. Oh and it will be great if you continued this. I like the way you potrayed Chihiro but I think that it will be good if you explained a little bit more about how her parents disappeared et cetera. You write in short sentences and it felt a little choppy as I am reading it but on the whole it was fine. ;)