Hey there great job even if (in my opinion) it ended a bit aprutly...I also read your other fic including Ben also fantastic work!

awesome job! What WAT fourm do you go to?

That was a fantastic fic! I loved the ending even though it was very sad. I liked they way you didnt show what happened between Sam and Ben, mysterious just like them. :) I loved this fic and I hope you write some more soon.

That was the most MAGNIFICIENT ENDING that I have read in
awhile. I hope that she 'rests in peace'. I figured that
Jack would be all over Ben for not even trying to help her.
I'm glad that they left everything to rest. In the next
Story I think that you should have them go back to Sams
place and sit and talk. I think that Ben needs someone that
he can trust to talk to. Keep up the Fantastic Writing.
Can't wait to read the next Story.

Wow, Now that was an AWESOME Chapter. I Love the way you had
Jack show just what he feels about Ben. If I was Ben I think
that he should thank Sam when she gets there because Jack is
going to kill him when he finds him. I hope that Ben does find
the Girl though. I also hope that Jack calms down a little bit
before he gets there. Can't wait to read the last Chapter.
Keep up the Awesome Writing.

great add. I love angry Jack. Can't wait to see what happens

awesome update!

Hey awesome chapter,I liked it so much!I hope you update soon...

That was another AWESOME Chapter. You sure have me hooked on
this Story. I can't wait for Sam to tell Jack what Ben just
did. I hope that Jack goes and puts him in his place. If he
knew what was going on with the Girl he shouldn't be hiding
it from Jack and his Team. Keep up the Fantastic Writing.
Can't wait for the final 2 Chapters. I am going to love
hearing what Jack has to say to him.

Hey!I loved the chapters 7&8!Please update soon...

awesome update!

That was an AWESOME Chapter. I hope that Ben has got this
figured out. I also hope that Sam isn't going to do something
that is going to make Jack mad at her. Surprised me when Ben
sat down at the table and listend to what Martin and Danny
had to say and then he told them to keep up the Good Work. I
guess he can be kind to other people. Keep up the Fantastic
Writing. Can't wait to read the next Chapter.

I thought that was an AWESOME Chapter. I like the way that Jack
got onto Ben. I'm like Sam. I think that Ben is alot of ego
driven. I hope that Jack and Ben can at least learn to get
along while they are trying to solve this case, because I think
that between the two they will be able to solve it. Ben has
some good ideas and Jack has some good ideas so between the
two they should be able to solve this case. Keep up the
Fantastic Writing. Can't wait to read the next Chapter.

great job!

Im so sorry that I missed the chapter 6 and 7! But I'm all caught up now!! Honestly it was good! Im really enjoying this! Its getting very intersting! I so cannot wait to read more! Keep up the fab work! :)