 Songorita 2009-04-14 . chapter 25I have no idea how I missed this story, but show how I did. Nontheless I love this story! Once again you have done an amazing job. This story along with your Betwitched and your Reclaiming Love story are some of my top favorite stories!
I can't wait to read more. I hope you have more Tommy/OC stories to come. Keep up the great work! |
 moonlite-n-roses 2007-12-07 . chapter 25Playing catch up Zeo... LOVED THIS!!
Tommy as an overprotective daddy-to-be was so adorably cute and I'd be so freakin' annoyed with him, even if he was being cute! LOL
This whole chapter was just so freakin' cute!! Gah... overcome with the fluffies!! *Giggle*
Excellent ending to a wonderful story girl... sorry it took so long to get to it. :D |
 GracefulCrane 2007-11-09 . chapter 25...And they live happily everafter...
*sighs*
A great ending for the great story! I loved it!
Glad Emma finally get her baby brother. And Robin...i think it's a cute name for the baby.
Amazing job, zeo and now i can't wait to read your next fic (I hope it will be Season of Revelation)...LOL
again...GREAT JOB! Two thumbs up for this fic :) |
 general-joseph-dickson 2007-11-09 . chapter 25You're right, Robin Oliver has an excellent ring to it. |
 GinaStar 2007-11-09 . chapter 25AAW! So sweet! I Loved it! Best ending! :D |
 Chylea3784 2007-11-09 . chapter 25That was the most perfect ending ever! It made me laugh (Tommy panicking when her water broke - so new dad!) - it made me cry (happy tears, though) - it was better than Cats! Thank you - it was a heck of a way to start my morning! |
 CoolDiva 2007-11-08 . chapter 25What a beautiful ending! YAY for the baby brother. Robin is the perfect name. Loved how nervous Tommy was when her water broke. So cute. And Emma was too adorable for words with her last line. Zeo... JOB WELL DONE! |
 Lone Nightblade 2007-11-08 . chapter 25Robin...I like it! That's a nice little throwback to the undercover days. This was a great closing chapter...sorta showed us that everything had settled down and they were all getting back to normal. I loved how Hayley became the godmother, that was cool and made perfect sense. Zeo, this story was awesome, and you did a wonderful job! |
 A J 2007-11-06 . chapter 24 Salutations and Congratulations on hitting 200! This story is wonderful, and I and my internet-hogging friends all love little Emma. That line at the wedding was priceless! Hope to read more of your stories soon, catch ya on the flipside,
A J |
 GracefulCrane 2007-11-04 . chapter 24Oh my goodness…What an excellent chapter. Totally adorable!
I almost cried when Tommy and Nikki exchanged their wedding vows. You made it so perfect and so heartfelt. Thank God Emma asked that cute lil’ question to them…(I laughed automatically when I read that part)
Tim’s mother and Nikki’s father were a highschool sweetheart?..that was simply W.O.W!
Well I can’t wait to read the ending chapter. I hope Emma will get a baby brother (LOL) |
 moonlite-n-roses 2007-11-03 . chapter 24Wow... just wow... where do I start. Victor had a stroke, it serves him right for what he did and what he put his wife through and what he turned his son into. There's a special place in hell for both him and his beloved boy.
Those vows... wow, they acutally made me tear up, they were so sweet. Heartfelt and moving Zeo, you truly have a way with words. :D
Emma's part was so cute and the whole baby brother thing, freakin' adorable! And having Nikki's dad and Tim's mom being high school sweethearts, icing on the cake.
Excellent and amazing chapter Zeo. :D I loved it. |
 GinaStar 2007-11-03 . chapter 24lol..I loved it! Perfect ending for a great story!! I hate that he had a stroke (sorry..strokes run in my family and I have a horror of them!) but I'm glad he's not around to bother them any more! Excellent! Very well written! |
 general-joseph-dickson 2007-11-03 . chapter 24Nice job |
 Chylea3784 2007-11-03 . chapter 24Totally excellent! OMG - Tim's mom and Nikki's dad were high school sweethearts? (Insert 'It's A Small World' song here) LOL - 'If she keeps that up she'll never get a baby brother' ROTFLMAO! I love a happily ever after. Update soon! |
 Lone Nightblade 2007-11-03 . chapter 24A stroke huh? That sure was a twist, I liked it. That was pretty nuts with the two good parents being high school sweethearts too, certainly didn't see that one coming at all. Great job with the wedding, the vows were cool and of course "can I have a little brother" was hilarious. Great job, zeo! Looking forward to the last chapter! |