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| malu31 2008-06-10 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful. |
| Zoser 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseWell written - very insightful. |
| luvnjack 2007-10-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseBravo, Bekki! Brilliant! |
| mara-anni 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseSweet Bekki!! Spot on! |
| BettyHall223 2007-02-20 ch 1, | abuseGreat writing. I enjoyed that. |
| Natters 2007-02-19 ch 1, | abusevery cleverly written |
| Siler's Wench 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was a work of art, elegant, thought provoking, beautiful. Really truly amazing work. |
| Leilina 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseWow! ;-) That was Brilliant! I truly loved it! |
| dreamer one 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written; some profound thoughts for a Sunday afternoon. thank you for sharing it with us. |
| TheatreBug 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseOkay...wow!! You have a real talent there that is threaded beautifully into your prose. I have a passion for writting but not a talent like yours. I love the abstract way you dealt with that and while short it was definitly sweet...and dare I say - brilliant! I like the way it was written in first person and how you didn't digress but you didn't need to. Amazing work - I will be reading more of your stuff! Thankyou for your review for Byzantine I hope you will keep reading. Smiles Sesa x |
| Thara 2007-02-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseOY ;-) ?! But sweet ... in a complicated simplicity ... I think ... |
| SammieAtHome 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! I also tend to adore metaphorical writing...oh well...But specially loved the last line: "I have always needed simplicity. But the simplicity of Jack O’Neill is brilliant, after all." |
| Athena2008 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseWonderful story! Thanks so much for sharing! |
| VisualIDentificationZeta 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abusegreat fic. Shanahan was never just simple... he was also dumb, intellectually challenged, lacking brain power, if he had any brain cells at all. I suspect he had air between his ears. I mean who, with any amount of brain, would ask their future father-in-law: "You really got one of those things in your head? That's gotta freak you right out sometimes." Yeah, he really did shine his brilliance. And he sure did make Sam proud... right... Sam sure got herself a winner, chosing this bozo over Jack, having thrown 7 years of love, bond, friendship and history over this moron. I agree with you... for a complicated person a simple person could never be enough, for an intelligent person an unintelligent person could never be enough in the long run. And we know that Jack is FAR from simple or dumb or uncomplicated. Again, great job on the fic. |
| gater62 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseI thought it made perfect sense! You captured the essence of Jack! |