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| moosehugger 2008-07-08 ch 4,  | abuseokay... what? |
| xcupcakex 2008-07-02 ch 4, | abuseinteresting. update soon? |
| AJ-lover 2008-06-23 ch 4, | abuseOH MY GOD! It's exciting! It's amzing! Please update SOON! |
| nameless 2008-04-27 ch 4, anon. | abuseGood really good. Just keep writhing |
| jayley 2008-04-06 ch 4, | abusei'm sad because i wanna know what happens, but it doesn't look like u'll be updating this story! |
| Nal'om 2007-08-08 ch 4, | abuseI'm lovin' it so far! Keep up the good work and update soon. |
| cynic.in.a.fishbowl 2007-07-15 ch 4, | abuseah! what happens next?!?!?!? btw, kel cant end up with neal. she and dom are so perfect for each other |
| Lady Knight Jocelyn 2007-07-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery engaging story!! I love the plot! My only suggestion is to check your writing for simple miss spelled words. But I love the story- you are a very talented writer! |
| Tortall101 2007-06-07 ch 4, | abuseVery cool - Please update soon! |
| Galloping Somewhere 2007-06-01 ch 4, | abuseOMG!What is the disease?Who wants them dead?Review soon!Love your writing.Keep going. |
| dragonrider713 2007-06-01 ch 4, | abuseWho wants to kill Alanna and Kel? I can't wait to know what happens next! |
| Gretta99 2007-06-01 ch 2, | abuseThe plot looks good, but grammar needs working on. I really do like the plot though. I would enjoy co-writing it with you if you don't already have someone else. |
| Mrs. Dom Masbolle 2007-05-31 ch 4, | abusethis is good, but i think it should be kel/dom story and not a kel/neal, but i love both combinations...anywho, i hope kel gets better! please update soon! |
| youdontwant2no 2007-05-15 ch 3, | abuseok, if you don't update soon, I think I just might die of the supense. keep the good writing coming! the grammer in this one was really good^-^ |
| youdontwant2no 2007-05-15 ch 2, | abuseit was really good, just watch your grammer*and yes I know I can't spell* but keep it up and just maybe have someone check your writing. keep up the good work^-^ |