I'm enjoying this. I liked Laura's inner thought and how easy she and Bill get along. Peter Thrace, this should be intereting.

I like this story idea. It's different and very enjoyable so far. Great job.

oh this was such a great fic...I really hope you write another about when they meet again on Galactica and recognize one another!

It's heartbreaking having them be pulled apart like that. You should write a sequel about them meeting up later. This was fun story. Nice job :D.

You did very well with this story. In this chapter, I particularly liked this bit of dialogue. It felt very real and made me smile:

'“Bill, you spend more time in the bathroom than Ellen!” Saul yelled as he banged against the door.
“Well then why don’t you go to her place,” Bill yelled back. “She’d be out by now!” He laughed as he continued to check himself out in the mirror.
“You’re an **!” Saul yelled...'

Congrats on finishing - and I look forward to reading your next story!

My goodness. So the "third date" prophecy came true for them. It's too bad that they have to leave. They really do make a fantastic couple. I'd love to see them discuss this as adults when he is an admiral. Nice job :D.

Nicely done! The charm bracelet and the charms he chose were perfect. Their 'first time' was well done. Thanks for sharing!

This story is so cute. Bill looking at jewelry was nice. Ellen needs to mind her own business, and so does Peter. This chapter was fun. Nice job :D.

I'll just leave a quick note here. (I reviewed under 'childminerva' at Survival Instinct) Great chapter and please update soon!

"One day, when I’m the Admiral, I’ll fly you to the edges of the galaxy and we’ll watch the stars take form.”

Damn...now I'M in love with Adama!
This is sweet - normally I would cringe at the thought of making them into teenagers and going AU, but you've written these two so well that I just have to overlook it!
I hope you continue this all the way up until they meet again after the attack...

How sweet. This is the perfect chapter to get the spring mood into me (meaning cheerful and lighthearted). They're so innocent here, I just loved reading it. I hope you update soon!
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I think this story is so sweet, I can't wait to read more!!

AW Bill is being sucha romantic. Laura and Bill Rock together and so deserve to be together.

This is such a light-hearted, fun story. Laura's mom is surprisingly alright with her going out on a date. Having Bill lead her on a mysterious trip was fun. Having them lay together reminded me of that part in "Unfinished Business." I liked the end too, with the star thing and him promising to take her up there some day. Nice job :D.

I thought the ending to the chapter lovely. You draw a really tender picture here of the two characters in the throes of young love. It's quite impressive. Thanks for posting!