Contary to your opinion this may be one of the best FMA fics ever read by me. It truely is incredible and moving and I also like that you focus on a much ignored character. Gracia really does deserve some more attention from fans. I love each bit of description you wrote and I also just love the whole flow of the piece. Great great job!

This is most definitely NOT the worst FMA fic ever written; it's one of the better ones. I enjoy reading your style of writing; the only thing I can complain about is a slightly confusing ending (from about the point Gwendolyn dragged Gracia out of the restaurant). Gwendolyn was a great character with a very distinct personality. As for your theme, Gracia praising Maes rather than the other way around, I much liked it-- it seemed very fitting.

Wow.

Those last few paragraphs just... broke my heart.

Good job, ja ne.

actually, i thought it was really good. i liked the mustang hughes mixup. that was funny.