loved the beginning. made me tear up a bit. yay! another story! you did a phenomenal job, looking forward to reading the next story. review you soon!

oh my god its not supposed to end! i love this!! great story but please don't stop the story! PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE!

love it! carol and val! lol!
you just have a serious talent for writing :)

AH! i love it! Keira would just be the jealous ** type wouldn't she? lol. anywho. you should totally add that warning about valentine to ur next story description...:D i love it and cant wait to read the sequel.

Course I'll read the sequal! I really do enjoy reading about Kiera and Valentine.

That would be so precious to see: Kurtis holding his baby girl and her holding tightly to his finger. Aw.

Oh, no! It's finished!

Wow, the chapter was short, but really great! I liked how Kurtis was like, "What the hell am I supposed to do?" and how Kiera was like, this 'thing'. Aw, they can be a proper family now! Except Kiera's turned the moody teenager, so we're at a downfall there :-(

How could she think that she is nothing! She's one of the finest things you've ever created!

Yeah, I'll DEFINITLEY be reading the sequal to this! Valentine/Kiera!

I love the way how Valentine proposes Kiera with that glowing engagement ring. It's really awesome ^^! And it looks like Kurtis is in a bad mood again. Sezzie makes some really awesome chapters. But out of all of them I think this one is the most romantic thus far. The next chapter (epilogue) should be really exquisite. I hope whoever reads that chapter will love it as much as I. Did I mension this is the first time I've reviewed? xD

-Bristol (aka Metalgirl3135)

Death... Pain... Misery... XD LOL Kurtis turning blue. (It is a nice color on him!)

Yeah I think I'd be a little bit more worried about what Lara would do than Kurtis too, if I crossed them in a bad way. With Lara it'd be a gamble- silent anger (the kind that pretends you don't even exist) or I'm-gonna-whip-out-my-guns-here-in-a-second-if-you-don't-start-running-right-now kind of anger. ;D

Well, yeah, I still wanna read more about Kiera (and Valentine). She's a cool character!

You actually sounded a lot like her there!

I listened to the song while I read, and I thought it went really well. And if I'm honest, I had a lump in my throat at the start, but when Valentine popped the quetion, I was really happy. Actually, I was just as happy as when Kurtis did the same to Lara. Maybe I'm just a helpless romantic at heart.

I liked Lara and Kurtis in this chapter. OK, so Kurtis more than Lara because he was acting all overprotective on Kiera and it made me laugh.

~You have a point. Alister - brains, yes. usefull in a fight, most likely not. but i still love Alister, even tho he always dies. =(
~only the Tomb Raider Ones.
~ I LOVE VALENTINE! he actually inspired the artifact that is being searched for in my new Tomb Raider Story - shadow's light. its the Valentin Dagger (Val-en-teen) heehee! btw imma steal Valentine from you and were gonna get married. just lettin u kno.

OMG, that was a fantastic chapter! It was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!! And thank you for mentioning me at the end! :-D Sorry I haven't done a longer review, I need to go and watch a film! :)

First of all I need to apologize for one of the false connections I made between Edward and Valentine. Edward is not blond. For some weird reason I was picturing Carlise when I wrote that, so I apologize to a Twilight fans reading that review. I didn't catch my mistake until just after I sent the message.

Yay, more evil bites the dust... or ashes... depends on how you look at it. I liked the connection you put between the Nephilim/ human conversation of the past and the present. Bet that was pretty weird for good (bad, I mean BAD) old Talmai! ;D

Way to go Kiera! She finally killed Talmai! I'm glad that this isn't the last chapter as well, though. But is there going to be a story after this? Y'know, about Aurora and everything? And at the start, I didn't understand how Big Aurora couldn't touch Talmai. But, I liked it, as always.

And I wouldn't worry 'bout my friends. Only one of them are in love with Rob Pattinson, the other one's in love with Taylor Launter. (but thats just the twilight fanatics). I'm not sure which one I'd go for, 'cause they're both quite braw;) You should hear the plan the Rob Pattinson future wife (not) has got to make him fall in love with her. And I'm sure part of it could be classified as illegal. They plan on kidnapping Selena Gomez so the Taylor Launter future wife (not) can be stuck in a room with him and make him fall for her. They shouldn't get they're hopes up.

But, back to the story, I really like you're writing and LOVE you're story (s) =)

you made a small screw-up in the 16th paragraph/line/thingie from the top. Kurtis doesnt know that ALister is dead, and yet, he doesnt ask for him for the fight.

OOh, you're your own BETA reader? thats cool. i think ive fallen in love with Valentine! hes so sweet and i have all your stories you write bookmarked on my computer. haha.