i liked it

Nice fic, you did especially well with the prose, but I do have some crit for you:

Please spell Eowyn's name correctly! If she is one of the main characters in the story her name really should be spelled properly.

It seems a little OOC, especially since Eowyn eventually realizes she didn't really love Aragorn.

Other than that, well done.

well that's a suckily ever after if i ever read! that's so rude! i like Faramir so much more than Aragorn. she's so dumb sometimes! but what ever floats her boat i guess.

Sad, *sniff*, but done well!

AW! :( that's so sad yet beautiful keep up the good work. Poor Faramir. wa!

Nice story. But Eowyn didn't really love Aragorn. And she finally realized that, when she fell in love with Faramir. Aragorn was really only a distraction.

Yeah, I liked this - and just want to put my arms around Faramir and squeeze him tight... wow... that was almost a fangirlish moment... anyway. great story.

Nela

Firstly, PLEASE SPELL ÉOWYN'S NAME PROPERLY! If you don't, it makes people think that you haven't read the books of LOTR, which is a major no-no if you are a LOTR fanfic writer.

Secondly, I would have thought that Éowyn would have a bit more kindness and courtesy than to leave leave Faramir without so much as a kind work or backward glance, and more sense than to run off like in pursuit of Aragorn again like the selfish, foolish young thing that she was during the War of the Ring.

Poor Aragorn - what she he going to do with her when she finds him? There is no place for her at his side - all that she is going to end up doing is ruining her reputation and throwing away her chance of happiness.

You have quite a nice style of writing, goldnote! Keep up the good work and Happy Writing!

Hugs,

Sarah x

_ that was so cool! i totally luved it! wow...i still have shivers!

Sakura Sama 101

Aw! That's so sweet! Follow your heart! I love it!

Not a bad story, but her name is Eowyn (grave accent over the E), not Eowyen or however you spelled it. Still, not bad, if not a little dry.

And, of course, you get bonus points for being a new Farawyn author. As a three-year Farawyn veteran, I *love* new authors by default.

Nice Idea! I love the story, great writing... Aww. Poor Faramir, Eowyn will come back to him right?