Ahh, I really love this story! Awesome work, I really can't wait for the next chapter! :)

thanx for the update! but i want to kill you cause you made all of your readers wait!gr

So I do watch this story but I've been so busy with moving and school that I missed it when I got the alert. But when I was organizing and deleting stuff in my fanfiction folder I saw the update email, so in my down time today at school I'm ready it. I am very pleased with how this story is going, although now I kind hope nothing hapens between Squall and Irvine. Just because they're family.

*sits up like a good doggy and begs for a new chapter*

I love this so much! And so original to make it the way you did. I've seen many child stories and they've been bleh or oh how perfect but this one is really neat. You've captured the essence of a ten year old perfectly and Squall is great I can't wait to read more to see how this pans out.

Yay! You're Back! I was worried that this story had been abandoned but I am glad to see that was not the case. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Woo, a chapter dedicated to meh. :B

UPDATE THIS D=

Wow I love this!
It's got a fab story line, keep up the good work!
:)

I started reading this on AFF, and I really liked it. I still really like it, and I hope that you update soon

Ep!
This story's so~ cool!
Please update soon :D

Wording is a little clunky, but storyline seems pretty solid to
start with.
"The child walked quickly behind her as if afraid to leave the safety of her side, Squall noted." would be better if it read "Squall noted that the child walked quickly behind her, as if afraid to leave the safety of her side"

This chapter is absolutely lovely. I can't wait to read more.

I like it, but, what the hell is a wife beater, man?

Ooh... I hope the main pairing doesn't change T_T