I loved the ending! It was great. )

I really liked this story, very interesting...that's probably because I can also relate to it

Asuma is cool

good job in portraying that!

Asuma is cool. I think he would really need to be cool, to put up with Team Ten. They are my favourite team, but as he thinks on meeting them - Ino is a loudmouth, Chouji is a glutton and Shikamaru is too lazy. But that is what makes it work. He was the perfect sensei for them, and this was really sweet. I like it.

This was a good story too. I like your stories. They're not over sweet or anything. They're not too long, not too short, and the ending isn't rushed or anything. I like the ending of this one too.

Haha, totally cute in a fluffy friendship kind of way...