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Reviews For: The Rights of God

saternoutlaw
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abuse...your right, that was problems the sickest most twisted thing i have ever read, and if i had written it i might just of thrown myself in to mental hospital.

awesome job. seriously, kudos to you. i always wondered just what they did for 300 years. the only thing that might have added too it.(and i say might very loosely) is to explain how 30 years sounds kind of short but when you say hundreds of hundreds(30 times later) of years. you kind of get a feel of just how long that is.

anywho before i rant any more. amazing job and this is so being saved.
-s.o
kanichiwa bitches
2007-11-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt's really well writen and interesting,it kept me hooked right to the end; good job =D
Chaotic Demon
2007-09-05
ch 1,
abuseActually, that wasn't too sick. Either I've been reading too much true crime, or my versions of this concept are worse. That was pretty cool. I like the logical tone in which Bakura explains everything.
Love'sBakura
2007-02-21
ch 1,
abusehey I don't see why you're so down on your self over that. I thought it was fucking awesome! I love how you made Bakura, it was so close to how his real personality should be! I was brilint I tell you and was awesome to read! You need to write more horror with Bakura, It was great.
Heya-Alex
2007-02-21
ch 1,
abuseOMG! That's sick, you're right... and wow, no sex... XDD
It's interesting... not every good fanfiction has to contain a pairing...;)

It sounds depressing.. so many years in a small room... without doing such things as sleeping... and there's no escape... *shiver*
poor bakura..
and he even couldn't let this end...
sounds like from an anciant greek myth...

Last month we learned something about the 5 steps of dying...
I think this si quite interesting...

and all the time he tried to find himself...
and at first, he was just a scared child...
and he thinks, Ryou could become like him?
Because... he still is at this step of life?

But.. also scary... he wanted to touch his sister's broken arm...
nice... sounds painfully...

Oh, i liked this story...
it's very well written... and... psychotic... just a little bit...xD
.ELIMINATED.
2007-02-19
ch 1,
abuseThat makes sense. Hell, wow. Awesome job. It was something really impressive, about how Bakura had driven insane and being in the Ring he thought about things. And that what it would feels like, being in dark room, without a door to get out..Hm. Weird. This remainds me how my sister used to kill sims in his game. Make them stay in the one room and took the door away. Sim will be panic, suffer and then finally die. Cruel, don't you think? I loved the way you ended this. It was interesting, really interesting ending. And you never know about Ryou. He isn't the main character, so Kazuki Takahashi don't show any other information about him. The theories will be only in the fans hands... Goes into my favorites, absolutely.
XxSexiItxX
2007-02-19
ch 1,
abusei am shocked, horrorfied, and absolutely amazed. what a FANTASTIC one-shot! one of my subjects in 6th form is psychoogy, but its not as interesting as this, it might get more interesting when we study abnormalities though...

i seriously think this is a brilliant story ^-^ well done you for writing it!! hope you get plenty of reviews for this, 'cos it is truly wonderful. ;]
SunamiHV
2007-02-18
ch 1,
abuseThis was very well written! You put a lot of thought into this, to think out how it was played. I didn't know Yami Bakura had a little sister... or is it just your part?
I really like this, i once knew that many words, but my lack of reading made me take one step forward and two steps back. Meh. The story is great!
AriEmeraldstar
2007-02-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow...most excellent writing. It's so...realistic, not to mention graphic. I can totally picture this as reality...all I can say is "wow."
--Arianna "Chisai" Emeraldstar
Tomboy 601
2007-02-18
ch 1,
abuseBakura went through a lot. Seeing his whole family being brutally murdered. I'd go insane too if I was him. I wonder whether Ryou is anything like him?
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