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Ghostwriter
2008-06-25 . chapter 2
Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
NatyAlbie
2008-06-20 . chapter 2
Oh you just have to write about this family again! It was so freaking good! I laughed so hard with Jason's fatherhood! I just LOVED it!
zeopurple
2007-08-23 . chapter 2
Yeah so, I don't really know why I never read this story before but I just did and let me say I thought it was great. I agree with Diva, you should bring this family back in another story.
Sango A.R
2007-06-12 . chapter 2
my favorite part was:

β€œAnd you...” Jason said, looking to his youngest child, who's eyes were watering and her lip was quivering. β€œ...I love you. Come here, give me a hug.”


it was so cute and random since he was being hard on his other kids.


anyways great story!!
you did a great job on it!
Shaneypooh
2007-04-01 . chapter 2
Good diversity in the family, I thought this was pretty good and very interesting.
Shaneypooh
2007-04-01 . chapter 1
Wow this reminds me sorta of the Peter vs Chicken second fight on Family Guy.
GinaStar
2007-03-23 . chapter 2
Oh yeah! I loved it! That was the perfect second chapter! Sorry I didn't get a review up sooner, I've been on vacation and just got back online ;)
moonlite-n-roses
2007-03-22 . chapter 2
I can't tell you how much I love this story NB. I seriously can't. It's freakin' wonderful! Tommy not listening to Kim and choaking was great! Plus... Jason taking the time to yell at the kids, wonderful! Seriously... just, much with the win my friend :D
CoolDiva
2007-03-22 . chapter 2
LMAO!! I loved this! Kim telling Katie to stop jumping on Goldar, Tommy falling cuz he didn't listen to Kim, Jason and Chris, Jason letting the kids know who was boss, Tommy getting all defensive about the Green and White rangers, Kim and the whip... all of it was hilarious!! Excellent work and I'm glad this family might show up again. Cuz I really can see them having a family just like this. As always, I love how realistic you make things. Again, excellent work!



Diva~
HarryPassionFan
2007-03-21 . chapter 2
Great addition. Boy were all the teens in trouble. LOL at Kim keeping that whip and searching Emma's rooms for more "stuff". LOL at Tommy's reaction to the news Kim did warn him to sit down and not eat. Hm maybe you can do another one of these but this time do one with Tommy and Prince Gaskett, now that would be intersting. I can't wait to see when you use Jason's family again. Maybe since it was mention you can do a one shot of the Ranger reunion.
Can't wait to read your other stories.

~Ana
BlacKTea
2007-03-21 . chapter 2
Thanx so much for adding another chapter. I hope to see this family again. :) Bye
BlacKTea
2007-03-13 . chapter 1
Hehe. This was hilarious! It was funny how Jason was kinda distracted the whole time. I would love to see a chapter 2 on this to see exactltly what the kids are thinking now.
Faded Feathers
2007-03-02 . chapter 1
oh man its like a cliffe but its not :pouts:
Ultimate Hero
2007-03-02 . chapter 1
I loved this story! Jason and kim are my fav. characaters so keep it up bro I'd love to see some mor stories from you
moonlite-n-roses
2007-02-24 . chapter 1
Wow... Just wow. The fighting was freakin' awesome, but the Jason's thoughts slayed me, I was giggling through this whole thing! Thinking about the game, steak, his daughter's umm... toy *giggle* It was the right mix of action and humor in my book, and you should definitely do a sequel or an epilogue of explaining why a wizard of oz reject was attacking their dad and mum. :D Great job Nightblade

P.S. you should totally use that family in future stories. I like how they aren't all carbon copies of there mom and dad. I like Emma :D
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