I'm speechless. This was simply amazing. You really gave the viewer a glimpse into quiet and secretive Keith's head. BRAVO!

Oh, so sweet! What a unique story line. Very refreshing take on Keith's memoirs. Ingenious use of foreshadowing with the "Laura"=Allura bit. This one paired with Jonah Mark's "Life After Death" are nice studies into the healing process; I enjoyed it immensely.

Very nice story. Just a little confused though...you mention Keith being half Chinese in the first part and then Lance mentions Keith is Japanese...some clarification please? Thanks! And thanks for a great story!

I really really liked your first 2 chapters. I can't wait to read the next one.