this was very well written and a very accurate (at least in my opinion) rendition of their relationship.

Amazing!

It's really good. I loved the last line...it is just the way I think about Akito.

I love this story! You really catch Kureno's feelings and Akito's reasons for her behaviour very well!

Aww, that was really sweet.
Beautiful.

Very good take on Akito and Kurino. I liked this one a lot, it's going in my favorites.