 Potterworm 2009-07-07 . chapter 1Perfect characterization. Great job. |
 BloOm 2009-06-18 . chapter 1 I've always wanted to read a story about McGonagall "scolding" Harry for the "sectumsempra incident" :)
One word : perfect ! :p
Really nicelly done ;)
I hope you'll keep writing "missing moments"... you're really good at it ;)
Cheers ! |
 Renesmee-worththefight 2009-06-14 . chapter 1I like this story. It's really cute! |
 Merciful Heavens 2009-02-11 . chapter 1Lovely story! I loved the way you went between James' talk with Minerva and Harry's talk... it was very well written!
Merciful Heavens |
 XsilverXdoeX 2007-09-10 . chapter 1That's great, really! I love anything Marauder-era & I love McGonagall! I can't write McGonagall, but, hey, no one's perfect! This is really good! Nice work! |
 ellaminnowpea91 2007-09-03 . chapter 1This is lovely.
I totally agree that James probably did something similar when he was in school, and whether he wants to admit it or not, Harry probably acts a whole lot like his father.
A great idea!
How's World Enough and Time coming? |
 fruit17 2007-07-27 . chapter 1Well, that was really interesting. I really liked the comparisons with Harry's father - from the summary I'd kind've expected to be reading comparisons with Sirius after the whole leading-Snape-to-a-werewolf incident. But this was great! Only I wasn't sure if your point was that Harry really was very similar to James, or if you were trying to show the way the other characters, namely McGonagall, failed to see how different Harry was from James.
Still, I loved it! McGonagall is probably my favourite HP character (or maybe I just love Maggie Smith) so I love reading anything about her. |
 laya.in.the.sun 2007-05-28 . chapter 1i like this fic. thanks! |
 petites sorcieres 2007-05-01 . chapter 1Great chpater. Yeah, it's quite strange to see how much similar and at the main time different are Harry andJames ^-^ |
 Aki and Tenshi 2007-04-27 . chapter 1Beautiful! Purely beautiful. |
 theturtlemoves 2007-03-02 . chapter 1Hey! I really enjoyed this, there's some great insights into Harry, James and not least McGonagall. A wonderful idea, executed beautifully. It never really hit me just how frightening it must be for teachers like McGonagall to have to face another James Potter. And although seeing everything through Harry's eyes in the books makes it seem like there's more of a difference between them, your story shows just how alike father and son really are. Well done, lovely work! |
 crescendoesque 2007-02-21 . chapter 1I loved this one-shot; it was excellent.
The exploration of the parallels between Harry and James were done in a curiously fascinating manner.
Minerva's feelings towards both of them are appropriate and well-written. Keep up the good work! |
 Aleta 2007-02-20 . chapter 1 I liked this piece a lot. I hope that you keep writing. |
 Nevatar 2007-02-19 . chapter 1 Very good writing.
I'm deeply disappointed that Harry didn't put the bleached ponce out of misery in HBP.
Well there might still be a chance in the Deathly Hallows. |
 witches with awesomeness 2007-02-19 . chapter 1Great Job!! Love the idea! really original!!
keep writing |