Damn you. Damn you to hell.
Trawling the internet searching for inspiration, a romantic optimist disguised as a sarcastic cynic, I have read your tale and been brought to my knees and wept.

Art is all about the passion, the emotion whether good or bad drawn from it as you have so rightly said, and though I dart between arts, jack-of-all, master of none I find myself wishing to be as fluid with my prose as you are here.

Sadly this is the best my writing gets, as both mild dyslexia and a crippling inablity to keep up with my own mind's working prevents me from ever completing a story.

I applaud you for drawing upon the best of the human status and not sticking to the clichéd 'happily ever after' ending that would have decreased the impact of your story greatly.

I remember reading this story years ago... and it was so beautiful it made me want to cry. now, finding it again and re-reading it, it still makes me want to do so. This is one my favorites and I am so glad I found it again. It is tragic in the best way possible or perhaps in the worst day, but either way I love this story from start to finish and I'll remember it forever. Thank you. This made me want to paint again.

That is the sweetest thing I have ever read. So sweet and so sad. Oh my God, I don't remember sniffling and crying so much.

It's heartbreaking and it's heart wretching and it's so, so, so sweet. I don't have any other words to express my overflowing emotions.

You're brilliant. The words so easy to follow and understand and imagine.

I wish I have the talent to write something of this genre, because I'm a total sap for it and I like to cry a little every once in a while.

The last paragraph absolutely got me wishing this wasn't the end, but it wouldn't fit any other way.

I read this all in one go, and it did take me a while before I could compose myself to write a review.

Thank God my sisters aren't home to see me crying like I just lost something important.

Anyways, I look forward to your other works, especially if it's about Axel and Roxas. (I'm a total sap for them too...)

Thank you for this wonderful story. It's one of those stories I'll read back on just because it made such a huge impression on me.

I really should have stopped at chapter four.
/Damn it/.
I mean, I saw this coming. The flowers didn't bloom, and the car crash they mentioned... I knew it was coming, but I hoped to God it wasn't.
/Why can't something have a happy ending/, just once.
I really need a happy ending right now.

3:20 in the morning. I have class tomorrow.
To continue reading, to not continue reading?
It's so tempting to keep going. I mean, all I've been reading for about a week is angsty stuff that just makes me depressed, so this is a nice change of pace. But still. Even with the (four hour long) nap I took earlier, I'm creeping up on the 'falling asleep during history' stage here.
Hm.
One more chapter? (I'm an idiot.)

I liked the way this one was written. At times it was a little confusing to understand (but only because it's been a long day), but it definitely got a powerful message across. What that message is I don't know, but I do know that I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was beautiful in it's own write, and definitely stirred emotions. --Silver

This story has a beauty beyond words, and a tale so rarely expressed with such amazing words. In here, there is an expression so deep, I can't even think of words to classify it.

My heart soars and sobs at the same time, just trying to comprehend. As my stomach becomes sick with grief, my eyes weep for the loss of a true love.


;_; Beautiful.

omg that was really sad! like i was covering my mouth and everything!! cut i guess i have to give you props and say that is was cool and nicely written

i would like to say, first and foremost, that this made me cry.
for some strange reason, it reminded me of my relation ship with my other half. though she isn't dead, she might as well be for the amount of time i get to see her.

anyway.
there were tears.
there were "why? why did it have to happen? they were so good for eachother!"'s...
and then there was understanding of what was going on.
being an artist myself, i really like your use of words, and symbolism, and imagery.
i liked it a lot.

so heres looking at you, kid.
you did well.

~Nightshade Out.

You are such a great writer. I think my heart kind of snapped in two while reading this.

You know, I've searched for this story for almost half a year) First time I read it, long ago, it touched my very being. I love how you phrase the feelings, how you show meaning in every small action. It really is beautiful. Couldn't hold back the tears at the very last paragraph of the story. My gratitude to you for writing this magnificent piece.

Geez, I just finished reading this for the fifth time, at least. I always end up crying at the ending and this was no different! I love your work; it simply amazes me to no end.

Yay x

Wow. I had to take a break between chapters 5 and 6, and to my mother's great shock I just curled up and cried. Poor dear, gave her a panic attack. Elegant and simple, I saw it coming but could not have been prepared. I adored it, Bravo. No word was wasted nor forgotten, thank you for writing and sharing!

Oh god...

this piece of beauty is much better than just a bitter sweet candy. Think I will crying the rest of the day...

It's so beautiful and...

have no words... T_T