Awesome! I love how you wove the transformers (especially those two in particular) into the Christmas theme and then kept the commercialism out of the story! This was an excellent and touching read! I thoroughly enjoyed it! The bit about Tracks making Raoul wear a Santa costume was hilarious!

Thank you very much for such an excellent work of art!

-"me"

So.
CUTE!
*hugs*
^-^

You updated, you updated, you finaly updated!! *runs in circles; jumps for joy; passes out*
Whew! Glad I got that out of my system. But I am so unbeliviably happy! I love this story line, you have a fantastic writing style, your grammar is good, and you wrote a story with Mirage in it. You deserve a Pulitzer for that alone. Our lovely blue and white spy is a pain in the aft to write. You almost broke my heart when I thought you weren't going to update until Christmas season. Kudos my friend. Did you ever think about doing any of the other holidays with the 'bots? Just curious. Happy reading to all and to all a good(Halloween) fright *shudders at awful poetry*
Meow,
Kat

Sorry, I can't remember my password to sign in correctly. Cute fic. I loved your Tracks and Raoul scenes - the dialogue was perfect, and I could hear them in my head. They were the only reason I read the fic through to the end, though, as Martha kept making me ill. Seriously, the poor child. Not only is she a stereotypically thin, sick little orphan girl, but she has the most annoying, pathetic, Warner Bros speech impediment of all time. W is substituted instead of L, R, and in random other places (fwirst). *shudders*. And her intelligence level kept going up and down like a yo-yo. I couldn't work out if she was supposed to be 2, 5, or 15. I kept hoping Mirage would accidentally step on her. Still, any fic you right with Tracks and/or Raoul in it, I will read!! Thanks for sharing this fic.

Cute, cute, cute. So flippin' cute. :3 And Raoul's line says it all perfectly.

So cute.

bout time you came back and made the last part but it was good. ^0^

very good. that was so cute. hope you have a new story up soon.

I LOVE this story so far ^0^ but then again, I LOVE christmas. keep up the good work. can't wait till chapter 12

I laughed myself sick. Raoul and tracks are made for each other.

And remember kiddies! Santa rides in STYLE! :3

Makes me want to go for my cocoa now, even though it's summer. :3

God, this is cute.

poor boy is doomed.

That really is so sweet. I love how you have all of the characters playing off of each other through this, all tied together with the goal of making a special Christmas for the children.