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| Heidi 2008-02-20 ch 6, anon. | abuseUPDATE...GEESH. |
| Spontaneity 2007-07-28 ch 6,  | abuseGaspeth... Danny, what are you getting yourself into now?? |
| Kaoli water goddess 2007-07-16 ch 6, | abuseDanny's actign a bit childish... jealousy ain't pretty and if he just talks to Lindsay, he'd understand that he doesn't need to be so protective of her. |
| chili-peppers 2007-07-16 ch 6, | abuseGreat chapter! I loved Danny's convo with Hawkes, his seeking relationship advice from Hawkes. I loved Lindsay's speech aswell. Can't wait for more :D Great job! |
| ReJo 2007-07-13 ch 6, | abuseGreat chapter! Please continue. |
| JennCorinthos 2007-07-13 ch 6, | abuseLoved this.. And Lindsay's speech oh man it pulled my heart strings... I love, love this... Please update soon... I can not wait to read more... JENNIFER |
| chili-peppers 2007-06-26 ch 5, | abuseHaha! I love jealous Danny! I loved the Flack and Lindsay scenes lol And the best line in this chapter was this “We realized we hadn’t seen which ugly tie you decided to put on today!” LMAO! But i really feel bad for Danny. Its doing his head in poor guy. Great chapter! Can't wait for more! |
| JennCorinthos 2007-06-21 ch 5, | abuseJealous Danny I love that... This is great... I can not wait to read more... So is Stella talking to Lindsay about Danny or FLack... I can not wait for the next chapter... JENNIFER |
| Kaoli water goddess 2007-06-21 ch 5, | abusePoor Danny; Lindsay's moods are driving him nuts! What's a poor guy to do? |
| ReJo 2007-06-21 ch 5, | abuseLindsay smiled brightly, “We realized we hadn’t seen which ugly tie you decided to put on today!” [funny] Danny’s eyes widened. Lindsay Monroe was trying to be funny. What the hell happened to dark, broody, silent Montana he had been working with all week? [I can understand why he's jealous. If only he knew that it's because there is no tension between Lindsay and Flack because there are no romantic feelings. I can't wait for the next chapter.] |
| ReJo 2007-06-21 ch 3, | abuse"If there was anything she could count on, it was for Dr. Hammerback to retain his innate talent for jocular creepiness." And THAT is why I love to write Sid's character! Nice summary of his character @ Yes, I caught your two references to 'love' - Lindsay almost loved him (she did, she was in denial), and Danny wanted to love her. |
| ReJo 2007-06-21 ch 1, | abuseI'm rereading your story and I have to say that you wrote the tension between the characters so well. You started off by stating that she Lindsay went to NY to get her freedom, yet you show how over time she's put up walls around herself. What irony! Very good chapter. |
| wjobsessed 2007-05-08 ch 4, | abuseI need another chapter, and I need something to give a little bit :) |
| Spontaneity 2007-05-07 ch 4, | abuseThey are still firmly wrapped up in one another, never fear... at least, that's as far as I know, because we haven't had a Danny/Lindsay moment in FOREVER!! I know how Linds feels with the staring thing... who doesn't love to watch that man?? This is good!! More! |
| Spontaneity 2007-05-07 ch 2, | abuseWhoo... I love these first two chapters, and yes, this one made sense, lol. |