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Ducky'sgirl4ever
2008-06-07
ch 5,
abuseA great end to the story. I liked the part where Greg was pinned nder the dad guy.
Ducky'sgirl4ever
2008-06-07
ch 3,
abuseAnother great chapter. I liked the part where Greg insisted on coming back to the scene.
Ducky'sgirl4ever
2008-06-07
ch 2,
abuseAnother great chapter. I liked the part where Gil told Warrick to have Sara go to the hospital to be with Greg.
Ducky'sgirl4ever
2008-06-07
ch 1,
abuseA great start to the story. I liked the part where Warrick was taking Greg to the hospital after he got shot.
Grand Puba of All The Smurf...
2008-03-10
ch 2,
abuse:)
GregsLabrat
2008-01-23
ch 5,
abuseGood ending. I liked it. I hope you do a sequel in the future though.
Zaik of Wake
2008-01-22
ch 5,
abuseLovely.
Radical Pretense Gothica
2008-01-16
ch 4,
abuseWell, this chapter was just a kick in the balls.
Cutiepie2191
2008-01-15
ch 4,
abuseGreat story so far! Keep up the good work:)
PrInCeSsFBi
2007-11-20
ch 5,
abuseugh
u got to be kidding me
that was too quick of an ending!
unless u r doing a sequel
PrInCeSsFBi
2007-11-17
ch 3,
abuseHURRY UP AND UPDATE ALREADY!!
Kaiho Inutaime
2007-07-28
ch 4,
abuseno
Kaiho Inutaime
2007-07-28
ch 2,
abuseuh oh...
Kaiho Inutaime
2007-07-28
ch 1,
abuseIt was good but kinda rushed..anyway, keep it up^^
PrInCeSsFBi
2007-07-06
ch 4,
abuseJUST HURRY
PLEASE
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