Aw, that was sweet. I liked it.

That was nicely written. This too, is one of my favorite scenes in the anime.

aw that was so sweet! im sure hisoka was having very similar thoughts in those scenes ^_^ that really was adorable, kudos to you!
~Rin

Aw! That was so cute. Actually that's one of my favorite scenes as well. This story was very well written and I really enjoyed reading it. I liked how you repeated the quote that Tatsumi said, it gave the story a nice flow, and I love that line! Great job!

G'aw!! This was so cute, I loved it! You kept Hisoka very well in character, which can be hard to do, but you did it splendidly! It was absolutely wonderful. Good job!

-UnspokenDreams

This was one of my favorite scenes from the anime as well. It was beautifully written, and it made me want to cry!! :) loved it.