I was cringing at the beginning of your story because Charlie was SO HAPPY and I didn't want anything to ruin that for him. Alas, I knew it was coming. And you even made it more tragic by the thoughts of Charlie believing he still had tomorrows with his brother. (Sniffle.)

Poor Charlie. This was very sad, but well written. Thanks, Beth

Wonderful, sad story. I had no idea It would be Don till the very end. Love the song choice.

Nice little story! Would have liked it to be longer but what ever.

wow. wasn't expecting it to be Don. That was really good...

Another tear-jerker... Good little piece. Sad, but very enjoyable.

sniff! so sad. great song choice.

Again great one-shot! So sad, but so moving! I can only agree that Alan would be devastated. Are you planning to write a second part from his view?

Thank you for all the great stories!

oh God! how sad! I can only imagine what Alan's reaction is gonna be! Charlie might need to be strong for him.

just whent he two brothers were starting to get closer!:(:(!