AHHH! I LUVED this! great job!

That was amazing. I enjoyed reading it!

loved it! couldn't stop reading it:)

LOVELOVELOVE!

Aw!

What a lovely story.

You got your point across well and never made it dull or repetive.

I like your story a lot!

Okay this story literally had me sobbing.

This was so damn cute I was smiling the whole time. I mostly read angsty storys, but I so needed this fluff I loved it! Although I think you need a sequel for Remmy and Miranda, and Siri and Kaila! If you do please let me know!

you are an awesome author! i especially loved this paragraph:

Love was a strange and complicated…thing. It was more than an emotion, more than a feeling. It wasn’t something you could get over from sleeping on it or with some journaling. It wasn’t lust, it wasn’t infatuation, or passion, or compassion…it was something entirely different. It was the air he breathed. The colors he saw. It was a way of life. It was in his walk and his words. He couldn’t just cast it aside. He couldn’t just let go. He couldn’t just move on.

wow i loved the ending too. you r an awesome writer.

LOVED the ending wacth some mistakes but absolutely loved loved the story, i am accually writting a story miself and it would mean a lot to me if you reas it its only 3 chapters long for know i dont know what to make the 4 chapter maybe you could help me

Great Story,

Ales

what you wrote

Lily turned her had to James

The sat there until the sun had

correct

Lily turned her head to James

They sat there until the sun had

onto next chapter and loving this one

What you wrote

ogling at her at mealtimes,

correct

idk at her at mealtimes, lol sry but the first word is wrong

what you wrote

“Did you ever really give the opportunity to know that? I

Correct

“Did you ever really give her the opportunity to know that? I

now on to next chapter

interesting

yaay go jamesie i root for thee :D