BWHAHAHAHAHA! This should have been an episode!

Why, if I didn't know better, I'd think that I was reading a script for an actual episode. It was just so hilarious and in-character. And the best part? Everyone got a happy ending. (Er, well, maybe not. But still.) Overall: My favorite Darkwing Duck story yet!

this is the funniest story i have ever read!

Fantastic. This could definitely be an episode. It has car chases, explosions, villains, and... a washing machine! I love how Jake and the others decided to have their own little plan and have it backfire so badly... too good!

Hehe. Dr Slug is villainous indeed.

The car chase was hilarious, especially the bit with Gizmoduck. Road Menace score grid indeed. I love Megavolt's mad driving skillz!

It's been a very long time since a story has made me take out a dictionary. But I did for "troglodytes." Well done! Definitely sounds like Tuskernini's speech. :)

"Being grounded was turning out to be a real drag."

Hehe, for Megs, that's literally "grounded!" Nice pun! And wonderful story so far... I just don't get why Negaduck would be trying to kill them... they seem to be out of his hair, er, feathers already. Was "grounding" them his way of making sure they don't use their powers so he can try to get rid of them?

I haven't read anything so funny in ages. Great job with writing Quackerjack and Megavolt. You certainly got me inspired.

There aren't words to describe how much I loved this story. It was so hilarious and you did a wonderful job with the characters. I LOVE Quacky and Megs! A standing ovation for you. Bravo!

I don't have time to read the rest just yet, but judging from the first four chapters, I can say that this story is really good!
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Man, the things those two will do for Negaduck. It was pure gold the way you protrayed every last character. You even threw in some of the lesser known DW villains for good measure. Keep up the good work, and I'll make sure to finish the rest of this very very soon. :)

Halarious! Halarious!! I love the freedom with which you wrote this, Sparky1. The personalities and character flaws of each villian was written so nicely. And there's really nothing much better than a good car chase. Loved it. Loved it.

Avian

"We're on a mission from Negaduck."

The Fearsome Five meet the Blues Brothers--what else can this be but a classic! You even got in the insane Carrie Fisher character.

megavolt with no power? Quackerjack with no toys? DARKWING WITH NO EGO BOOST?! HAVE YOU NO PITY?! *laughs way too hard for own good*

This story is hilarious! I laughed so hard I could barely breathe! Keep up the awesome work!