Wonderful story, with a great OC.

Cute story :) I love the characterizations and how the story fits to the nature of the show.

And as usual I'm too lazy to bother to sign in first. Another great piece, introducing a fan-created character while keeping within the spirit of the series. Funny, and Torpedo is an interesting character. (Her special villain "gimmick" is priceless.) It's too bad that Sophie D. doesn't seem to do the online thing, and that Sparky doesn't write DW stuff anymore. Of course what she does have up is excellent.