osh!! i hope this'll just be an Aoshi/Misao pairing..

anyways.. i liked it..

Very cute, I must say. I'm not a very die-hard fan of Kenshin, but one of my own friends is bent on me being just as obsessed as he is. So, I decided to read one, and of course, yours was phenomonal. Keep on writing.

Nice...really nice. The only real problem with it is that you went with the cheesy “Just shut up and kiss me you fool.” as your last line. Its so cliche and...cheap.

That was interesting and well written, I liked it.

The characters were portrayed very well, and I liked the way the story went. -sigh- I've found out that I can't write one-shots, since it always seems like they should be continued...

Anyway, I've finally reviewed something of yours, so I feel a bit better, since you've been reviewing one of my stories (I'm finally getting better at sending reviews-don't know why I haven't been until recently). I should go read some more of your stories.

So while I have the urge to scream, "WHAT THE HELL!?" I won't. Everyone's entitled to their own couples and such, and so I'll shut up there.

Anyway, lovely story, nice to see something in Meiji times and has valentine's day in a way that would MAKE SENSE for Valentine's day.

Though I'm a bit confused at how Misao gave him a valentine and he went basically, "ZOMG! I LOVE MEGUMI! YAY!"

Ignore that, I'm odd.

Anyway, lovely story, and my only critique is you had Misao cry so easily. Misao does -not- cry. People seem to forget this, hence why I have to remind them, being the Misao fanactic I am, *Watsuki-sama said himself I act like her, so hehe* and ya. She only cries in serisously horrible times- example, Kaoru's 'death' (but only when she was alone and away form everyone) and only when Kenshin said he would bring her back. So, truly, she would -not- cry over something that small. Yes, I know it wasn't small at all, but you need something ZOMG HUGGE to make Misao cry.

*Is very defensive over this 'cus I cry all the time and so Misao's my role model in this case*

And also, nice involing Misao in a Megumi/Aoshi fic. Most people would like, do some OCC thing denying they have a connection at all y'know?

*Still finds the ending completly random, but... ya.*

goodfic

WHO CARES IF IT WAS LATE, IT WAS SUCH TOUCHING SHORT-FIC, i looved it bravo, later

You know this is unfair. Thanks to you and Belle, this certain pairing is starting to grow on me. I never realized how compatible they are...before all of this.

THis my friend, was brilliant. Okina's death was sad, but such is reality...and it contributed to the development of Aoshi's character.

Anyways it was romantic and yet not overly much.

Still it seems like someone is a romantic though...*grins*

Nicely done!

P.S. This is Maya from rp eternalmeiji. ^_^

You can go back and proof read it later when its not the middle of the night! So glad you wrote this! Glad I happened to tell you the story of Saint Valentine, of course you made it sound romantic, instead of bloody. ^_^ I enjoyed this tale, Megumi and Aoshi's lives crossing paths in Kyoto. Okina's death was sad, but it was a phase in life that Aoshi will be facing and you're right it did help him develop more. I liked the scene of Aoshi leaping from roof top to roof top to catch up with Megumi and her comment about him not calling her by name. My word, when Aoshi decides to take action he sure takes action! Four days later and she's already pregnant!?? Of course, four years of denying one's feelings will do that to you, right?

Thanks for writing this! Beautiful!

I enjoyed reading this story. It was a sweet story about Aoshi and Megumi. I hope you write more about them soon!